to revise this work is very important no one is focusing on what im asking i need the work in 12 h

the model should describe the experience and u should support the experience with relevant theories and show that you support the experience with in text citation of this theories . 

you have to link the Personal development plan in the text in the action part of what you will do differently  should be SMART .... 

i will post my friend work to get the idea of how the assignment should be structured and how you used the morel ad the theories and the personal development plan please read his assignment im gonna send oonly one of the part he did read it and see how you can improve my assignment compared to his ... he got good grade so please follow him dont copy him as he already submitted it please