I need someone to fix my paper it was graded "F"
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Thank you for the submission. I appreciate your staying up-to-date during this difficult time. You have included some good sources, but none of them are primary sources. I provided some guidance in the rubric on what constitutes a primary source. You also did not include the required thesis or topic background. Please carefully review assignment instructions and make certain to submit all required elements. Let me know if you have any questions. I wish you and yours all the best during this difficult time. Let me know how I can help.
The topic: I chose was Portugal's influence on Angola with culture and slavery.
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