2LP

FEED BACK FROM SLP 1

You did a great job in writing your Module 1 SLP assignment. You provided a clear picture of the purpose of ASU and how the EOSS department supports student success and engagement. The impact of not having aligned institutional departmental mission statements was outlined with detailed rationale.

The only observed issue was some aspects of your paper did not contain scholarly writing, due to short three sentence paragraphs. Scholarly paragraphs should be between five to seven sentences. For future papers you can make your writing scholarly by adding more details, incorporating a reference, sharing professional experience, or look to combine paragraphs.

Conduct a brief interview with a leader within the higher education department under study. The purpose of the interview is to identify an organizational problem that is affecting the department. Provide a brief explanation of the problem and any challenges to overcoming the problem (e.g., stakeholders, governance, or budget).

Your completed SLP 2 should be 3 to 4 pages. 

SLP Assignment Expectations

Assignment-Driven Criteria: Demonstrates mastery covering all key elements of the assignment in a substantive way. 

Critical Thinking/Application to Professional Practice: Demonstrates mastery conceptualizing the problem, and careful consideration of experts or research in the field of educational leadership. Module content and concepts are thoroughly and thoughtfully analyzed, synthesized, and evaluated. Conclusions are logically presented and applied to professional practice in an exceptional manner.

Scholarly Writing: Demonstrates mastery and proficiency in scholarly written communication at the doctoral level.

Quality of References and Assignment Organization: Demonstrates mastery using relevant and quality sources and uses appropriate, relevant, and compelling content from the module readings or other sources to support ideas, convey understanding of the topic, and shape the whole work. 

Citing Sources: Demonstrates mastery applying APA formatting standards to both in-text citations and the reference list.

Professionalism and Timeliness: Demonstrates excellence in taking responsibility for learning by adhering to course requirement policies and expectations. Assignment submitted on time or student collaborated with professor for an approved extension on due date.