Thinking Deeper: Part 4 - Transformation View Assignment Instructions
Overview
The purpose of these Thinking Deeper Assignments is to encourage you to think critically and
theoretically about issues you will cover in this course. You are expected to seek out biblical,
philosophical, and scientific sources to answer the question presented and are expected to demonstrate
depth of thought.
In the video, “Christianity and Psychology – Eric Johnson,” Dr. Johnson mentions that he puts the
Transformation view under a Christian psychology view. These views were just recently separated out
for your text. Do you think the Transformation view should stand as its own viewpoint on the relationship
between Christianity and psychology, or should it be contained within the Christian psychology view?
Please explain your thoughts on this and present a strong argument for your answer.
Instructions
The Thinking Deeper: Part 4 – Transformation View Assignment requires you to answer this
question: “Should the Transformation View stand as its own viewpoint in a study of the relationship
between Christianity and psychology, or should it be contained within the Christian psychology view?”
Please include the following components in the Thinking Deeper: Part 4 – Transformation View
Assignment paper:
A clear introductory paragraph that introduces the reader to the issue being discussed.
A discussion of the issue with relevant scriptural, philosophical, or scientific resources to
support the points being made.
A clear conclusion that summarizes the information that was presented.
Running head: CREATION REGAINED 1
Creation Regained: How an understanding of the fall affects ways in which I view research in
my area.
Ryan M. Harmon
PSYC710: Psychological Research & Biblical Worldview (B02)
Dr. Angela Rathkamp
January 26, 2023
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Creation Regained: How an understanding of the fall affects ways in which I view research in
my area.
The grand narrative, as discussed by Wolters, is the Biblical narrative of creation, fall,
and redemption. Understanding the fall and redemption as per the Biblical teachings can be vital
in helping understand how Bible stories are related to human experiences. By understanding the
spiritual view of the various Biblical figures and how they navigated the search for their purpose
through the various challenges they encountered and overcame, I will be able to understand how
their experiences and teachings can be integrated into the worldview of teens with depression in
helping them overcome their psychological problems. My understanding of the fall, according to
the discussion by Wolters, is that human beings can relate their worldly experiences to the events
that happen in the biblical stories, which means that there are times when we may fall and feel
like we have lost it all, but there is always a chance for redemption from that fall and become
better and more fulfilled human beings. Wolters supports a transformational approach to life with
his thesis in which he says, “the redemption in Jesus Christ means the restoration of an
originally good creation.” According to him, understanding the biblical narrative of creation,
fall, and redemption can be instrumental in shaping the lives of human beings in that they can
relate to it as they navigate through the challenges they may face in their lives as they seek to
obey the scriptures (Wolters, 2005, p. 1). The focus of this paper is on establishing how an
understanding of the fall, as per Wolters’ perspective, will affect the way I view research in my
area, which is teen depression. It will establish how I will apply the insight that I have gained
from reading Wolters’ account and discussion of the fall to my research on depression among
teens.
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Teen depression is a mental health problem that causes a teenager to have persistent
feelings of loss of interest in activities, hopelessness, and sadness resulting in the teen having
behavioral, physical, and emotional problems. Teen depression can be influenced by the
experiences that the teen has either in school or at home, which may include academic
expectations, peer pressure, and the changes happening in their bodies. In most cases, teens
struggling with depression have behavioral issues that cause them to act in damaging and
undesirable ways that negatively impact their overall well-being. My interest in this area of
research in psychology is influenced by the need to understand how best teens can navigate
depression and lead more productive and fulfilled life. After understanding the fall, I think that
there are several ways through which I would integrate the biblical worldview into the processes
of counseling and helping teens deal with depression and learn how to avoid it. I will establish
how they can cope with depression from a scientific perspective and integrate it with the
Christian view. According to Bitsko et al. (2022), one-fifth of children aged 12–17 years had
ever experienced a major episode of depression in the United States. My interest is in helping
understand how integrating the scientific and biblical perspectives into interventions to help
teens cope with depression will help address the problem. Integrating the Biblical perspective
will help the teens understand the purpose that they are working towards in life so that they can
focus on it and recommend some of the Biblical teachings to help them navigate the challenges
that they may encounter along the way.
The biblical narrative can play a significant role in helping make a difference in teen
depression psychology. My reason for integrating the Bible into psychology research is
influenced by the fact that truths from the Biblical stories can be compelling in ways that the
scientific psychology perspectives are not, which means that a combination of both, especially in
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establishing interventions for depressed teens, can help enhance the counseling outcomes.
Understanding how the various biblical characters faced challenges and eventually got out of
them can help teens develop the interest to apply the same concepts to their lives in helping cope
with depression. For example, prayer forms a significant part of the Biblical stories in which
characters call upon God to help them when faced with tough situations. Teens can use faith and
prayer to help guide their actions and live their lives as per Biblical teachings. The fall of man is
demonstrated by the biblical story that human beings sinned and angered God so that he wanted
to completely destroy the human race. However, redemption happened when Jesus came to earth
and died on the cross for our sins s that we could be forgiven. As Wolters says, “The gospel
announced that the power of God to renew the entire creation was now present in Jesus by the
Spirit. This liberating power was demonstrated in Jesus' life and deeds and explained by his
words. By his death on the cross, he battled the power of the evil and gained the decisive victory”
(Wolters, 2005, p. 120). This explains the power of restoration that comes with the forgiveness
of sins. This teaching can be instrumental in teen psychology when helping a depressed teen
cope because it can help them understand that everyone makes mistakes and feeling hopeless and
sad or acting in a way that is not right is not the end of the world because there is still a chance
for redemption. Understanding the story of Jesus and the challenges he faced on earth can help a
teen understand that there is always a way to get past the challenges and have a better future after
being redeemed from the problem. Jesus went through the fall in which he ended up getting
crucified and dying on the cross, but he experienced victory demonstrated in his eventual
resurrection. This is demonstrated in John 16: 33 which says, “I have told you these things, so
that in me you may have peace. In this world you will have trouble. But take heart! I have
overcome the world” (John 16: 33). This can help the teens view depression as a fall related to
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the experiences of Jesus, and achieve victory once they have addressed the problem and get back
to their normal lives.
The biblical perspective implies that as long as one has faith, one knows that one will
make it through any trials because God is by their side. Teaching teenagers about the Bible using
Bible stories can help them understand how having faith in God helped a lot of people, including
Jesus, in getting through the trials they faced. According to Psalm 46:1, “God is our refuge and
strength, an ever-present help in trouble” (NIV, 1973, Psalm 46:1). I will integrate this verse in
my psychology research by establishing the role that faith can play in facilitating better coping
for teens going through depression. The Biblical worldview is demonstrated in thinking about
depression as a tribulation that one can get through if they have faith in God. Faith is gained by
understanding the Biblical narratives and all the times that got helped his people through trials
and redeemed them from sin through the death and resurrection of Jesus Christ.
According to Walters, the original good of all creation as made by God is to be restored
in all aspects of life and development, including emotions and others, and it is the plan of God
for things to be that way. He says, “The obvious implication is that the new humanity (God’s
people) is called to promote renewal in every department of creation” (Wolters, 2005, p. 73).
This means that Christians must be actively involved to achieve the desired transformation. I can
integrate this view in my psychology research on teen depression by using scientific means and
Biblical teachings to help teenagers understand the factors that may be leading them to
depression and how they can avoid them. By using the positive examples and teachings
established in the Bible to influence their beliefs and change their behavior, I will be doing the
transformational work that is expected of me as per the Biblical teachings. It is important for
teenagers who are struggling with depression because of issues of body image and peer pressure
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to understand that everything that God created is intrinsically good and that they are perfect just
the way they are. Integrating this teaching into the counseling process can help achieve the
desired outcomes of helping teenagers effectively cope with depression.
My perspective to integrate the discussion by Wolters will provide an effective balance
between the suggestions that I will find through my psychology research which includes
scientifically proven interventions, and the teachings of the Bible to understand the behavior of
teenagers when going through depression. I will integrate the science of psychology and
Christian theology in establishing ways that I can make the teens struggling with depression
understand the role that Biblical teachings can play in facilitating better coping. I will use this
integration to develop a strategy for counseling which will involve first asking about the values,
beliefs, and practices of a client, then making specific recommendations based on values and
making religious recommendations for coping, like being engaged in religious practices like
prayer and meditation as a way of coping to avoid the negative thoughts that cause them to
becomes hopeless and feel unfulfilled resulting in them becoming depressed. The biblical
scriptures speak about the problems that people experience in life, including psychological
disorders like depression.
I would apply an understanding of the fall to researching teen depression in psychology
by relating the various aspects of depression that teens face and the challenges that come with it
to the experiences of great biblical figures like Jesus Christ. I would use the experience of Jesus
and how he overcame the challenges he faced with the help of God to establish how teens can
integrate religious practices and doctrines into dealing with the mental health problems as well as
behavioral problems that come with teen depression. I will identify the specific Bible scriptures
that can present the message of hope and assurance that with God in their lives through the
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application of the specific Christian doctrines and values, they will be able to overcome any
challenge and come out victorious to lead lives that are more meaningful. The Biblical doctrines
will be instrumental in my research because they will help me establish how the teens can
develop a reformational worldview based on the understanding of the Biblical doctrines and
practices that helped many great people presented in the Biblical narrative through their trying
times.
I would apply an understanding of the fall in teen depression psychology by integrating
Christian values and doctrines in the implementation of the various models of promoting mental
health for depressed teens. Using Biblical teachings to show them the possibility of redemption
even from the worst of falls may be helpful in motivating them and giving them hope that things
will be better if they apply the recommended religious values and practices in their daily lives
and when faced with trials. According to Wolters, genuine healing of the youth is a matter of
healthy progression, and salvation in Jesus Christ means restoration of society and culture in
their present developmental stage (Wolters, 2005, p. 77). This means that based on the Christian
doctrines and what God expects of me and all of his creation, it is our duty to take part in the
redemption of mankind from the fall. I can do this in my research area of teen depression by
integrating the Christin doctrines and values into the establishment of interventions for teen
depression to include Christian aspects that will help them develop a Christian worldview that
will facilitate better coping with depression and other challenges that they may face at their stage
of development.
Conclusion
From the Christian worldview, as established by Wolters, all aspects of reality that
human beings exist in derive their very existence from God as their creator. The order created by
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God was distorted, resulting in the fall, and Jesus Christ became the restoration redeeming
human beings from the fall. Therefore, as God's creation, we are expected to restore God's
creation from the fall, which is demonstrated in different aspects of our lives. The integration of
the Christian doctrines into my research area of teen depression in psychology can be
instrumental in helping establish better coping practices for teens to help them navigate the
challenges that come with their developmental stage, like peer pressure, body image issues, and
academic expectations. Understanding the fall and the redemption that comes after will present a
message of hope and positivity for the teens. They can adopt religious practices and teachings
into their daily lives to help navigate situations that may lead them to become depressed. An
understanding of the fall presented me with an opportunity to explore and develop a different
view of the models of psychology for teens struggling with depression.
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Ghandour, R. M. (2022). Mental health surveillance among children—United States,
2013–2019. MMWR supplements, 71(2), 1.
New International Version (1973). John 16:33.
https://www.biblegateway.com/passage/?search=John+16%3A33&version=NIV
New International Version (1973). Psalm 46:1.
https://www.biblegateway.com/passage/?search=Psalm+46%3A1&version=NIV
Wolters, A. M. (2005). Creation regained: Biblical basics for a reformational worldview. Wm.
B. Eerdmans Publishing.
PSYCHOLOGY AND CHRISTIANITY TENSION 1
Psychology and Christianity Tension
Ryan M. Harmon
Doctor of Philosophy in Psychology, Liberty University
Author Note
No known conflict of interest exists concerning this paper.
PSYCHOLOGY AND CHRISTIANITY TENSION 2
Abstract
Psychology and Christianity are founded on different concepts that often conflict with each other
resulting in tension between them because they each disagree with what the other says. The
most significant reasons for the tension between religion and Christianity are based on the fact
that psychology is a science, while Christianity does not believe in scientific explanations for
various phenomena related to human behavior. The focus of psychology is on environmental
factors and how they affect human behavior, while Christianity explains human behavior through
the life and teachings of Jesus Christ. Understanding the cause of tension between Christianity
and religion will play a significant role in helping establish ways through which the two can
possibly be integrated and work together to effectively meet physical and emotional human
needs. The integration of biblical scriptures and scientific concepts in understanding human
behavior requires further research to establish how best they can be integrated to help reduce the
tension between them.
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Table of Contents
Abstract ......................................................................................................................................2
Psychology and Christianity Tension...........................................................................................4
Tension Related to the Root of Psychology ..............................................................................4
Tension Because of the Differences in the Basis upon which their Ideas are rooted ..................6
Tension Caused by the Different Approaches to Meeting Human Needs ..................................6
Tension about their Opinions on what Influences Human Behavior .........................................8
The tension arising from the differences in their information sources ..................................... 10
Tension Arises from how they view Each other ..................................................................... 12
Recommendation to Address the Tension .............................................................................. 13
Conclusion ................................................................................................................................ 11
References ................................................................................................................................ 12
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Psychology and Christianity Tension
Psychology is a form of scientifically studying the mind to understand human thought
and behavior (McLeod, 2019). Christianity is a religion that involves understanding, believing,
and applying the doctrines of the Bible based on the life and teachings of Jesus (Christ Cox &
Thompson, 2022). The tension between psychology and Christianity arises from their
conflicting approaches to the different phenomena in human life, including those related to
human behavior. The Christian and psychological approaches conflict with each other,
especially when it comes to the understanding of human problems and how to solve them,
resulting in disagreements regarding how they view the relationship between the soul and the
spirit. Most Christians do not agree with psychology or trust it in how it explains different
phenomena because it is not based on faith and tries to explain human behavior in ways that go
against what the Bible teaches (Field, 2017). The conflict between the two arises because of the
conflicting ideologies concerning explaining human behavior. This paper presents a detailed
examination of why there exists tension between psychology and Christianity by integrating the
relevant Biblical and philosophical sources that explain the existing tension. The paper also
suggests a recommendation as to how the tension can be addressed.
Tension Related to the Root of Psychology
The history of psychology is rooted in ancient Greek Philosophy, and the idea was first
created and introduced by people who did not believe in God and worshipped many Gods
(Carter, 2019). This goes against Christian doctrines, with Christians believing that there is only
one God. This ideological difference is the reason why there is tension because many Christians
believe that psychology was created by people who did not believe in God; hence it cannot be
part of their Christian practices. The tension between Christianity and psychology is because of
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the differences in ideologies between the root of psychology and Christian teachings (Carter,
2019). This means that the dislike of psychology by the Christians is based on the Biblical
teachings in which they believe that since the root of psychology was not based on Christianity
and its ideas are not in line with the Christian doctrines, then psychology is wrong. As Such,
Christians apply the biblical teachings about God and evil like the teachings of Jesus Christ in
Matthew 7:17, which says, " Likewise, every good tree bears good fruit, but a bad tree bears bad
fruit” (New International Version, 2011, Matthew 7:17). According to Christians, the fact that
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the root of psychology was not based on Christian doctrines make it a bad thing hence they
believe that the root of psychology is bad making psychology itself bad.
Tension Because of the Differences in the Basis upon which their Ideas are rooted
According to Entwistle (2021), the tension between Christianity and Psychology is
influenced by the difference in the basis upon which their ideas are rooted, with Christianity
being based on faith and psychology being based on truth. There is a significant conflict
between theology and science, and with psychology establishing the truth in explaining human
behavior from scientific facts, the Christians believe it goes against the Christian doctrines where
it is believed that God is the creator of everything and science has nothing to do with how the
world is today and how people choose to behave. Christians do not agree with psychology
because it does not involve the spirit realm, as all the truths it portrays in its approaches to
explaining human behavior are based on scientific concepts which go against the religious
concepts of explaining human behavior. Christian doctrines are based on the teachings of the
Bible and the belief in God, while psychology is all about science without anything to do with
Biblical teachings. Christians believe in the Bible as the only truth, and when psychologists talk
about scientific facts, they defy what the Bible teaches, which explains why there is significant
tension between the two.
Tension Caused by the Different Approaches to Meeting Human Needs
Another significant source of tension between psychology and Christianity is related to
the different approaches that they each take when it comes to meeting the needs of human beings
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in terms of behavioral and emotional well-being (Entwistle, 2021). Psychologists believe that
scientific ways are the best in establishing how to meet the various human needs in terms of their
emotions and behavior, while Christians believe in having faith and looking up to God and the
scriptures in the search for meaning and achievement of human needs. According to Philippians
4:6, "Do not be anxious about anything, but in every situation, by prayer and petition, with
thanksgiving, present your requests to God” (New International Version, 2011, Philippians 4:6).
In working towards achieving the human needs, Christians base their beliefs on the actions of
Jesus as their role model as he used the Holy Spirit to intervene in helping meet the human
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needs. Psychology focuses on worldly ways of getting the emotional needs of human beings, but
Christianity emphasizes looking up to God and the Holy Spirit in seeking fulfillment and their
other emotional needs.
Tension about their Opinions on what Influences Human Behavior
Psychology is of the opinion that human behavior is influenced by environmental factors,
which means that human beings are not responsible for their actions (Entwistle, 2021). This
contributes to the tension between Christianity and psychology because, according to
Christianity, the environment does not play any role in determining what we do, and blaming it
on the environment is just a way of psychology making people fail to take accountability for
their actions by making them believe that they are not responsible for what they do. According
to the Bible in Proverbs 23:7, “Or for as he thinks within himself, / so he is; or for as he puts on a
feast, / so he is” (New International Version, 2011, Proverbs 23:7). This means that the actions
of human beings are as a result of their thoughts and it is who they are and has nothing to do with
the environment around. Therefore, Christianity disagrees with the explanation of human
behavior established by psychology because Christians believe that human actions are a result of
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their choices and that they can choose to do right or wrong (Kováčik, 2020). Therefore, saying
that a person did something and blaming it on something else in the environment is wrong
because, according to Christianity, human beings always have the free will to make a choice as
to whether to be good or bad. God said that the choice is ours in choosing life or death, which
means we have a choice to be good or bad. This is established in Deuteronomy 30:15, which
says, "See, I set before you today life and prosperity, death and destruction” (New International
Version, 2011, Deuteronomy 30:15). This means that God has given us the option of choosing
what we want to do with our lives between good and evil. This means that nothing else can be
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blamed for the choices we make but ourselves. This goes against the ideologies of psychology,
which is based on the belief that our actions are influenced by other factors in the environment
and that we do not do them out of our own will. There is a lot of tension between Christianity
and psychology because psychology makes a person who does something wrong appear to be a
victim, yet the Bible provides that we all have a choice between good and bad. The conditions
that we find ourselves in as human beings are a result of the choices that we make, which is why
Christianity encourages us to accept responsibility for our actions and make better choices to
better our conditions. However, this is in conflict with psychology, which believes that we are
not to blame for our current condition and that to change it for the better, the conditions in our
environment have to change.
The tension arising from the differences in their information sources
Another significant reason why there is tension between psychology and religion is
because of the differences in the views they hold about human behavior in terms of how they
explain their approaches (Entwistle, 2021). Christianity uses biblical scriptures as a source of
information to explain why people conduct themselves the way they do, in terms of good and
bad, and they also believe that the scriptures provide the guidance that one needs in order to
change their behavior for the better (Entwistle, 2021). Psychology holds a different belief from
what Christianity does and is more focused on basing its conclusions on explaining certain
human behavior on observation of nature and reasoning to understand why people behave in a
certain way. Their focus is on ensuring that they change a negative aspect of what they observe
to be a significant influence on behavior and implement scientific interventions to change that
behavior to one that is desirable. The tension between Christianity and religion is such that each
holds ideas that oppose the other when it comes to explaining the behavior of human beings and
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the interventions that can be used to address the behavior. For example, if you ask a Christian
about how to solve a certain behavioral problem, they will tell you to look up to God and pray
for the desired result, but if you consult a psychologist, they will inform you to look at the factors
in your surrounding that influence that behavior and eliminates them.
According to Field (2017), Christianity rejects any ideas that explain human behavior and
nature that are not related to what the Biblical scriptures say, and psychology rejects some
Christian concepts of explaining human behavior by stating that human behavior is influenced by
the environment and has nothing to do with the Bible. Kemp (2018) argues that the main reason
why there is tension between psychology and Christianity is because of the differences in their
perception of how the spirit and the soul relate, as established from their historical debates.
Psychology is of the opinion that the soul is the aspect of a human being that is present for there
to be life in a body, while the spirit is the non-physical part of the human body which is
responsible for decision-making and reasoning (Weger & Wagemann, 2021). Informed by this
ideology, psychology argues that proper reasoning and decision making is only negatively
affected by factors in the environment of a person, and changing that environment or moving to
an environment that fosters good behavior are the only ways to address behavioral problems.
Christianity disagrees with this explanation of the soul and spirit as defined by psychology by
arguing that the mind, heart, and imagination, which are the inner life and experiences of a
person, are what form the soul, while the spirit is also about inner life in relation to God which is
about having faith, hope, love, and perseverance. The inner life of a person and how they relate
with God is what influences the person to be who they are in terms of behavior. This means that
if the inner person has a good relationship with God, then it is likely to influence them to have
positive behavior and experiences on the outside. This explains Christianity's argument that
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nothing in the environment of a human being is to blame for the decisions and behavior they
choose because God gives them the free will to choose between what is right and what is wrong
(Kováčik, 2020). Therefore, Christians believe that undesirable behavior is avoidable when
someone ensures that they live by the Biblical teachings and respect its doctrines, while
psychology argues that there is no way one can avoid undesirable behavior if they are
surrounded by factors in their environment that cause them to engage in behavior that is not
desirable.
Tension Arises from how they view Each other
There is significant tension between Christianity and psychology because of how they
view each other. For instance, Christianity argues that while psychology plays a vital role in
generating information that is useful in explaining the behavior of human beings, the truths that
are established by the Bible carry more authority than psychology will ever be able to have.
They argue that biblical scriptures speak to the heart of the troubles that people experience and
that God understands a lot about the problems that people experience, including psychological
disorders. This is established in Psalm 56:8, which says, “You keep track of all my sorrows. You
have collected all my tears in your bottle. You have recorded each one in your book” (New
Living Translation, 2015, Psalm 56:8). This presents reassurance to human beings that God
knows and understands our troubles. According to Christians, the biblical scriptures provide a
more detailed description and explanations of the problems that people experience, including
mental health disorders, and provide solutions to the problems by simply looking up to God and
seeking His help and guidance through the scriptures. This is unlike psychology which only
focuses on explaining human behavior through scientific research, which according to
Christians, is not sufficient or compelling enough to help people understand the cause and
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solutions to their issues in the way the Biblical teachings do. The Bible has more influence
because it is more connected to the worldview assumption about human behavior compared to
the psychological concepts of explaining behavior.
Recommendation to Address the Tension
While there is a lot of tension between Christianity and psychology because of the
differences between them, as established above, the tension can be eased by the recognition of
some of the ideas that they have in common. They are both focused on helping people by
helping them heal from what is wrong in their lives. Christianity provides Biblical solutions, and
psychology provides scientific solutions, but they both work towards the same goal, which is to
help human beings address the challenges that they may be facing in their lives (Hathaway &
Yarhouse, 2021). This is an indicator that if psychology and Christianity work together despite
their differences, they can learn from each other as they establish interventions to help meet the
needs of human beings when they are struggling with different challenges they encounter in their
lives.
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Conclusion
The various perceptional differences between Christianity and psychology, as established
above, explain the reason why there is tension between the two. They hold different views of
each other based on differences in ideologies concerning human behavior. Understanding these
differences is instrumental in helping understand the role that they each play in assisting human
beings to address their emotional and behavioral challenges. Understanding how they each can
learn and benefit from each will be vital in helping facilitate the generation of desirable
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outcomes when addressing human needs. Further research into the effective integration of
Christianity and Psychology is necessary to establish how well the two can work together.
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SAMPLE APA-7 PAPER FOR GRADUATE/DOCTORAL STUDENTS 1
Created by Christy Owen of Liberty University’s Online Writing Center
[email protected]; last date modified: April 13, 2022
Sample APA Paper: Professional Format for Graduate/Doctoral Students
Claudia S. Sample
School of Behavioral Sciences, Liberty University
Author Note
Claudia S. Sample (usually only included if author has an ORCID number)
I have no known conflict of interest to disclose.
Correspondence concerning this article should be addressed to Claudia S. Sample.
Email: [email protected]
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Table of Contents
(Only Included for Easy Navigation; Hyperlinked for Quick Access)
Sample APA Paper: Professional Format for Graduate/Doctoral Students .................................... 6
Basic Rules of Scholarly Writing ................................................................................................... 7
Brief Summary of Changes in APA-7 ............................................................................................. 8
Running Head, Author Note, and Abstract ..................................................................................... 9
Basic Formatting Elements ........................................................................................................... 10
Font ................................................................................................................................... 10
Line Spacing ..................................................................................................................... 10
Spaces After Punctuation .................................................................................................. 11
Footnotes ........................................................................................................................... 11
Heading Levels—Level 1 ............................................................................................................. 11
Level 2 Heading ................................................................................................................ 12
Level 3 Heading .................................................................................................... 13
Level 4 Heading. Must be bolded and indented ½”. Add a period, one
space, and begin your content on the same line as shown here. ....................................... 13
Level 5 Heading ............................................................................ 13
Specific Elements of Academic Papers ........................................................................................ 13
Tables of Contents and Outlines ....................................................................................... 13
Annotated Bibliographies ................................................................................................. 14
Appendices ........................................................................................................................ 14
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Crediting Your Sources................................................................................................................. 15
Paraphrasing and Direct Quotes ........................................................................................ 15
Paraphrasing .......................................................................................................... 16
Block Quotes ......................................................................................................... 16
How Often to Cite Your Source in Each Paragraph ......................................................... 17
Rule for Omitting the Year of Publication ........................................................................ 17
Arranging the Order of Resources in Your Citations ....................................................... 17
Two Works by the Same Author in the Same Year .......................................................... 18
Two Works by Two Different Authors with the Same Last Name .................................. 18
Three or More Authors Cited In-Text ............................................................................... 18
Number of Authors in the Reference List ......................................................................... 19
Numbers ........................................................................................................................................ 19
Displaying Titles of Works in-Text .............................................................................................. 19
Primary Sources versus Secondary Sources ................................................................................. 20
Personal Communications ............................................................................................................ 20
Resources Canonically Numbered Sections (i.e., the Bible and Plays) ........................................ 21
Bible and other Classical Works ....................................................................................... 21
Plays .................................................................................................................................. 22
Lectures and PowerPoints ............................................................................................................. 22
Dictionary Entries ......................................................................................................................... 23
Changes in Reference Entries ....................................................................................................... 23
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Electronic Sources ........................................................................................................................ 24
Adding Color ................................................................................................................................ 24
Self-Plagiarism .............................................................................................................................. 25
Final Formatting Tweaks .............................................................................................................. 26
Exhaustive Reference List Examples & Additional Helpful Resources ....................................... 26
Conclusion .................................................................................................................................... 29
References ..................................................................................................................................... 30
Appendix ....................................................................................................................................... 40
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Abstract
Begin your abstract at the left margin. This is the only paragraph that should not be indented.
Unless otherwise instructed, APA recommends an abstract be no more than 250 words. It should
generally not contain any citations or direct quotes. This should be a tight, concise summary of
the main points in your paper, not a step-by-step of what you plan to accomplish in your paper.
Avoid phrases such as “this paper will,” and just structure your sentences to say what you want
to say. The following three sentences exemplify a good abstract style: There are many
similarities and differences between the codes of ethics for the ACA and the AACC. Both include
similar mandates in the areas of ----, ---, and ---. However, each differs significantly in the areas
of ---, ---, and ---. For more detailed information, see “Writing an Abstract” at
https://www.liberty.edu/casas/academic-success-center/wp-content/uploads/sites/28/2019/04/
Writing_an_Abstract_Revised_2012.pdf (note that you would not include any links in your
abstract). This is just now at 168 words, so eyeball how brief your abstract must be. Think of
your paper as a movie you want to sound enticing, and the abstract as the summary of the plot
you would share to draw people’s interest into wanting to come and see your movie. You want to
really hook and intrigue them. What you have to say is important! Remember to stay under 250,
words. Keywords highlight the search terms someone would use to find your paper in a database.
Keywords: main words, primary, necessary, search terms
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Sample APA Paper: Professional Format for Graduate/Doctoral Students
The title of your paper goes on the top line of the first page of the body (American
Psychological Association [APA], 2020, section 2.11). It should be centered, bolded, and in title
case (all major words—usually those with four+ letters—should begin with a capital letter)—see
p. 51 of your Publication Manual of the American Psychological Association: Seventh Edition
(APA, 2020; hereinafter APA-7). It must match the title that is on your title page (see last line on
p. 32). As shown in the previous sentence, use brackets to denote an abbreviation within
parentheses (bottom of p. 159). Write out the full name of an entity or term the first time
mentioned before using its acronym (see citation in first sentence in this paragraph), and then use
the acronym throughout the body of the paper (section 6.25).
There are many changes in APA-7. One to mention here is that APA-7 allows writers to
include subheadings within the introductory section (APA, 2020, p. 47). Since APA-7 now
regards the title, abstract, and term “References” to all be Level-1 headings, a writer who opts to
include headings in his or her introduction must begin with Level-2 headings as shown above
(see section 2.27) for any divisions within the introductory section.
If you do choose to include headings in your introduction section (which is optional), be
sure to include two or more subheadings, since APA (2020) forbids stand-alone heading levels.
A second notable change in APA-7 is that writers are no longer required to cite their source every
single sentence that content from it is mentioned (section 8.1). As demonstrated in this paper,
since all of the content (other than the examples included for illustration and reference-entry
variation purposes) comes directly from the APA-7 itself, citations to the APA-7 are only
included for the first instance in each paragraph. Section and/or page numbers are included
parenthetically throughout for the sake of students who desire to know exactly where the stated
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rule appears in the APA-7 itself. In your academic papers, however, it is critical to include the
required author(s) and year, as applicable, for all citations that are included; this may include
more than one citation for each resource per paragraph, as required to avoid any confusion about
the source of that content.
Basic Rules of Scholarly Writing
Most beginning students have difficulty learning how to write papers and also format
papers correctly using the seventh edition of the APA manual. However, the Liberty University
Online Writing Center’s (OWC) mission includes helping students learn how to be autonomous,
proficient writers. The OWC also provides students with templates to help them with basic
formatting elements, but this sample paper is designed to help graduate and doctoral students
learn to master APA rules and formatting on their own, which will prove helpful as they progress
in their studies and work toward future publication in scholarly journals.
For the purpose of instruction, this paper will use second person (you, your), but third
person (this author) must be used in most student papers. First person (I, me, we, us, our) is not
generally permitted in academic papers. Students should refrain from using first or second person
in college courses (even though the APA manual encourages this in other writing venues) unless
the assignment instructions clearly permit such (as in the case of personal reflection sections or
life histories). If in doubt, students should clarify with their professors.
APA-7 delineates separate rules and guidelines between “student” and “professional”
writers (APA, 2020). Because a primary purpose of graduate and doctoral studies is to prepare
those students to publish professionally, Liberty University has decided to have undergraduate
students follow APA-7’s guidelines for “student papers,” and graduate/doctoral students follow
APA-7’s guidelines for “professional papers.” Separate templates are available for each level.
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This sample paper illustrates and discusses the rules and formatting of professional papers, as
required for all Liberty University graduate and doctoral courses using APA-7 style.
Brief Summary of Changes in APA-7
Most of these changes will be discussed in more detail below; this is just a very brief
overview here. APA-7 reverts back to only one space after closing punctuation in the body of the
paper (APA-6 required two spaces; APA, 2020, section 6.1). Student (undergraduate) papers no
longer include a running head or abstract (sections 2.2 and 2.8); professional (graduate/doctoral)
papers require an abstract but the running head is now the same on all pages (the added phrase
“Running head:” from APA-6 has been eliminated; see section 2.8). Title pages are different for
both student and professional formats. The title of a paper is no longer limited to 12 words
(section 2.4).
Citations of all resources with three or more authors now use the first author’s last name
and the term et al. (APA, 2020, section 8.17). Reference entries must name up to the first 19
authors before adding an ampersand and ellipsis (up from APA-6’s six authors; section 9.8).
APA-7 omits the phrase DOI and instead standardizes DOIs to be presented in hyperlink format
(i.e., https://doi.org/10.1177%2F1524838017742386; section 9.35). Formatting guidelines for
annotated bibliographies are included in APA-7 (section 9.51), as well as expanded and
standardized reference entry examples. As discussed above, it is no longer necessary to cite a
source every single time you refer to content gleaned from it as long as it is clear the content
comes from that source (section 8.1); APA-7 also expanded the specific location noted in the
citation to include page, paragraph, section (as used throughout this sample paper, to direct the
student to the exact relevant content), chapter, timestamp, etc. (section 8.13).
APA-7 allows for “self-plagiarism” (clarified and defined below). It also invites writers to
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highlight the most relevant work first, rather than just present all works in alphabetical order
(APA, 2020, section 8.12).
Heading-level formatting has changed, and APA-7 provides more flexibility in font and
line spacing (APA, 2020). The Bible must now be included in the reference list and its citations
must include the editor’s details and year (section 8.28); there are also new rules for dictionary
entries. Publisher city and state details are omitted from all reference entries except those
involving presentations or conferences, as is the phrase “retrieved from.” Hyperlinks should be
live, but they may be either presented as blue underlining or plain black text.
Running Head, Author Note, and Abstract
APA (2020) delineates separate formatting requirements for what it terms “student” and
“professional” papers. Its descriptions for those labels, however, suggests that it regards
undergraduate-level writing to fall within the student purview, and graduate/doctoral-level
writing (including dissertations and theses) to fall within the professional purview. Since a
significant goal in graduate and post-graduate studies is preparing those students to publish in
scholarly journals at and beyond graduation, it makes sense to train those students in the
formatting that is required for professionals. As such, Liberty University has opted to require the
APA-7’s “student” version format for all undergraduate assignments using APA, and its
“professional” version for all graduate and doctoral assignments. To that end, this being the
sample paper for professional formatting, it includes the additional elements required for such: a
running head (same on all pages), an author’s note, and an abstract. Graduate and doctoral
students will use this format. Note that the first “paragraph” under the author’s note is generally
only included if the author has an ORCID number, which most students will not have. However,
it is included in this sample paper and the corresponding template because the purpose of these
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resources is to prepare students to publish manuscripts post-graduation. The student’s full
address, however, is intentionally omitted from the Liberty University template and this sample
paper for privacy and safety reasons, since student papers are often unfortunately published
online and disclosing their home addresses could pose safety risks.
Basic Formatting Elements
Font
APA-7 does not prescribe a specific font or size (APA, 2020, section 2.19) but rather
allows for some choice (e.g., 12-point Times New Romans, 11-point Calibri, 11-point Arial, 11-
point Georgia, or 10-point Lucinda Sans Unicode). Most journals and academic institutions will
have a preference, however, as even APA-7 acknowledges on p. 44. For this reason—and
because font size can easily be changed if an editor interested in publishing a student’s work
prefers a different font—Liberty University recommends that students use 12-point Times New
Romans or 11-point Calibri font for the body text in all academic papers. Data in charts, figures,
and tables should be presented in 8- to 14-point size in either Calibri, Arial, or Lucinda Sans
Unicode font. Students are not permitted to use any fonts such as script, calligraphy, poster,
decorative, or others not found in published scholarly journals. Since APA-7 itself authorizes a
variety of fonts and sizes, assignments will be gauged by word count rather than page count.
Word count constitutes the number of words within the body of the paper, and excludes the title
page, abstract, reference list, appendices, and other supplemental resources.
Line Spacing
APA-7 adds extra/blank lines on the title page (APA, 2020, sections 2.5, 2.7, 2.21). It also
specifies that spacing in tables and figures may be single-, 1-1/2-, or double-spaced; equations
can be triple- or quadruple-spaced. Footnotes, when used at the bottom of a page, should be
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single-spaced (section 2.21).
Spaces After Punctuation
APA-7 reverts back to just one space after closing punctuation in the body of the paper, as
well as in reference entries (APA, 2020, section 6.1). Ordinarily, it would be improper to have a
paragraph with only one sentence, though APA itself asserts that for its purposes “sentences and
paragraphs of any length are technically allowed.”
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Footnotes
This leads to another new rule in APA-7, one allowing the inclusion of footnotes (APA,
2020, section 2.13). Footnotes should be use very sparingly and are appropriate to include
information such as that in the prior section to alert the reader to supplemental material that is
available online for that thought. Though APA-7 authorizes placement of footnote content either
at the bottom of the page (as in this sample paper) or on a separate page after the reference list
(section 2.21), Liberty University recommends that student place them, when used, at the bottom
of the page, as shown here.
Heading Levels—Level 1
This sample paper uses primarily two levels of headings (Levels 1 and 2). APA style,
however, has five heading levels, which will be demonstrated briefly for visual purposes. See
section 2.27 of your APA-7 (APA, 2020) for more details on heading levels and formatting. In
APA-7, all heading levels are now bolded and in title case (capitalize each major word—usually
those with four or more letters, including hyphenated compound words). Do not capitalize
articles (a, an, the) in headings unless they begin a title or follow a colon. Level 1 headings are
centered, with the content falling on the line beneath each, in standard paragraph format.
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See https://blog.apastyle.org/apastyle/2016/05/index.html
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Many students misunderstand that you progress from Level 1 to Level 2 to Level 3 to
Level 4 to Level 5, but that is not correct. In fact, your paper may have only Level 1 headings, or
just Levels 1 and 2. The rule of thumb is that you must have at least two of each heading level
that you use, otherwise omit that heading level.
Headings are basically styling ways of organizing your paper, without using an outline
format. APA specifies five levels of headings; you would likely never use Level 5 and only very
rarely use Level 4 as a student. Think of each level as the different levels in an outline. Roman
numerals, for example, would be Level 1 headings. Capital letters would be Level 2 headings.
Numerals would be Level 3 headings. Lowercase letters would be Level 4. And lowercase
Roman numerals would be Level 5. You must always have two or more of each subheading, but
you do not need every level. You start with Level 1 and work down from that (but not
consecutive 1-2-3-4-5). Under a Level 1, you would either have two+ Level 2 headings or none
at all (just one big section in paragraphs before the next Level 1 section).
Special note about conclusion sections: Please note that some of the sample papers
published by APA to demonstrate proper APA-7 format (including the “professional” sample on
pp. 50-60 of the APA-7 manual) depict the “Conclusion” section with a Level-2 heading. This is
limited to empirical papers that are being submitted for publication in scholarly journals, as those
conclusions pertain to the “Discussion” sections in such papers and are not conclusions of the
overall papers themselves. Conclusions in academic papers at Liberty University will be Level 1
headings (including dissertations and theses, which are divided by chapters, unlike journal article
manuscripts).
Level 2 Heading
Level 2 headings are left-justified (APA, 2020, p. 48). The supporting information is
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posed in standard paragraph form beneath it. Never use only one of any level of heading. You
must use two or more of any level you use, though not every paper will require more than one
level. The heading levels are simply demonstrated here for visual purposes, but you would
always have two or more of each under a larger heading, as shown throughout all the other
sections of this sample paper.
Level 3 Heading
Level 3 headings are bolded, left-justified, and italicized; the content falls on the line
underneath, as with Levels 1 and 2.
Level 4 Heading. Must be bolded and indented ½”. Add a period, one space, and begin
your content on the same line as shown here.
Level 5 Heading. Same as Level 4, but also italicized. Despite heavy writing experience,
this author has never used Level 5 headings.
Specific Elements of Academic Papers
Tables of Contents and Outlines
APA (2020) does not regulate every type of paper and some elements in various
assignments are not addressed in the APA-7 manual, including outlines and tables of content. In
those cases, follow your professor’s instructions and the grading rubric for the content and
format of the outline or annotations, and use standard APA formatting for all other elements
(such as running head, title page, body, reference list, 1" margins, double-spacing, permitted
font, etc.). Note that most academic papers will not require a table of contents, nor would one be
appropriate. One was included in this paper simply for ease-of-access so students could go
directly to the content they want to see. Generally speaking, no table of contents would be
necessary for papers less than 20 pages of content, unless otherwise required by your professor.
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That being said, when organizing outlines in APA format, set your headings up in the
proper levels (making sure there are at least two subheadings under each level), and then use
those to make the entries in the outline. As discussed above, Level 1 headings become uppercase
Roman numerals (I, II, III), Level 2 headings become capital letters (A, B, C), Level 3 headings
become numbers (1, 2, 3), Level 4 headings become lowercase letters (a, b, c), and Level 5
headings become lowercase Roman numerals (i, ii, iii). Many courses now require “working
outlines,” which are designed to have the bones and foundational framework of the paper in
place (such as title page, abstract, body with title, outline/heading divisions, supporting content
with citations, and references), without the full “meat” that fills out and forms a completed paper.
Annotated Bibliographies
Many Liberty University courses also now require students to prepare and submit an
annotated bibliography as a foundational step to building a research paper. There is significant
merit in these assignments, as they teach students to critique the resources they have found and
rationalize why each is relevant for their paper’s focus. APA (2020) includes a section on
annotated bibliographies (9.51; see the example provided on p. 308). The appendix attached to
this sample paper also includes a sample annotated bibliography.
Appendices
Appendices, if any, are attached after the reference list (APA, 2020, section 2.14). You
must refer to them (i.e., “callout”) in the body of your paper so that your reader knows to look
there (see the yellow-highlighted callouts to Table 1 on p. 54 and to Footnote 1 on p. 55 of your
APA-7 for visuals on how this should appear in your paper). The word “Appendix” is singular;
use it to refer to individual appendices. APA-7 regards it as a Level 1 heading so it should be
bolded. I attached a sample Annotated Bibliography as a visual aid (see Appendix). You will see
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that I included the title “Appendix” at the top of the page and formatted it in standard APA
format beneath that. Because I only included one appendix, it is simply titled as such. If there are
more appendices, assign a letter to each and denote each by that: “Appendix A” and “Appendix
B.”
Crediting Your Sources
Paraphrasing and Direct Quotes
Paraphrasing is rephrasing another’s idea in one’s own words by changing the wording
sufficiently without altering the meaning (remember not to just change a word here or there or
rearrange the order of the original source’s wording). Quoting is using another’s exact words.
Both need to be cited; failure to do so constitutes plagiarism. Include the author(s) and year for
paraphrases, and the author(s), year, and page or paragraph number for direct quotes. APA-7 also
expands this to include figure number, time stamp, etc.—whatever detail is necessary to get the
reader directly to that content. Page numbers should be used for any printed material (books,
articles, etc.), and paragraph numbers should be used in the absence of page numbers (online
articles, webpages, etc.; see APA, 2020, section 8.13). Use p. for one page and pp. (not italicized
in your paper) for more than one (section 8.25). Use para. for one paragraph and paras. (also not
italicized in your paper) for two or more (section 8.28). For example: (Perigogn & Brazel, 2012,
pp. 12–13) or (Liberty University, 2019, para. 8). Section 8.23 of the APA (2020) manual
specifies that it is not necessary to include a page or paragraph number for paraphrases (just for
direct quotes), but writers may choose to do so to help their readers find that content in the cited
resource.
When naming authors in the text of the sentence itself (called a narrative citation), use the
word “and” to connect them. For example, Perigogn and Brazel (2012) contemplated that . . .
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Use an ampersand (&) in place of the word “and” in parenthetical citations and reference lists:
(Perigogn & Brazel, 2012).
Paraphrasing
Only use quotes when the original text cannot be said as well in your own words or
changing the original wording would change the author’s meaning. You cannot simply change
one word and omit a second; if you paraphrase, the wording must be substantially different, but
with the same meaning. Regardless, you would need to cite the resource you took that
information from. For example, Benoit et al. (2010) wrote that “although, a link between
attachment and posttraumatic stress disorder (PTSD) symptoms has been established, the
mechanisms involved in this link have not yet been identified” (p. 101). A paraphrase for that
quote might be: A link between dysfunctional attachment and the development of PTSD has
been made, though there is insufficient data to determine exactly how this mechanism works
(Benoit et al., 2010).
Block Quotes
Quotes that are 40 or more words must be blocked, with the left margin of the entire
quote indented ½ inch. Maintain double-spacing of block quotes. APA prefers that you introduce
quotes but note that the punctuation falls at the end of the direct quote, with the page number
outside of that (which is contrary to punctuation for non-blocked quotes). For example, Alone
(2008) claims:
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Half of a peanut butter sandwich contains as much bacteria as the wisp of the planet
Mars. Thus, practicality requires that Mrs. Spotiker nibble one bit at a time until she is
assured that she will not perish from ingesting it too quickly. (p. 13)
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Note that there are no quotation marks for block quotes, as shown in the example.
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Usually quotes within quotes use single quotation marks; however, use double quotation marks
for quotes within blocked quotes, since there are no other quotation marks involved. Also
understand that direct quotes should be used sparingly in scholarly writing; paraphrasing is much
preferred in APA format (APA, 2020, section 8.23), as it demonstrates that you read, understood,
and assimilated other writers’ content into one cohesive whole.
How Often to Cite Your Source in Each Paragraph
As already mentioned above, APA’s (2020) new official rule is that you no longer must
cite your source every single time you refer to material you gleaned from it (section 8.1). It is
now acceptable to cite your source the first time you refer to content from it in your paragraph,
and then not again in that same paragraph unless your phrasing does not make the source of your
content clear. This is demonstrated throughout this sample paper.
Rule for Omitting the Year of Publication
That being said, APA (2020) has clarified its special rule that excludes the year of
publication in subsequent narrative in-text citations (when you name the authors in the text of the
sentence itself), after the first narrative citation in each paragraph. It should continue to appear in
all parenthetical citations (see section 8.16). For example, Alone (2008) portrays imagery of Mrs.
Spotiker. This includes her devouring a peanut butter sandwich (Alone, 2008). Alone conveys
this through the lens of astronomy. Note that the year of publication was omitted from the second
narrative citation (underlined for visual purposes).
Arranging the Order of Resources in Your Citations
If the material you cited was referred to in multiple resources, separate different sets of
authors with semicolons, arranged in the order they appear (alphabetically by the first author’s
last name) in the reference list (i.e., Carlisle, n.d.-a; Prayer, 2015) (APA, 2020, section 8.12).
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APA-7 now invites writers to prioritize or highlight one or more sources as most prominent or
relevant for that content by placing “those citations first within parentheses in alphabetical order
and then insert[ing] a semicolon and a phrase, such as ‘see also,’ before the first of the remaining
citations” (APA., 2020, p. 263)—i.e., (Cable, 2013; see also Avramova, 2019; De Vries et al.,
2013; Fried & Polyakova, 2018). Periods are placed after the closing parenthesis, except with
indented (blocked) quotes.
Two Works by the Same Author in the Same Year
Authors with more than one work published in the same year are distinguished by lower-
case letters after the years, beginning with a (APA, 2020, section 8.19). For example, Double
(2008a) and Double (2008b) would refer to resources by the same author published in 2008.
When a resource has no date, use the term n.d. followed by a dash and the lowercase letter (i.e.,
Carlisle, n.d.-a and Carlisle, n.d.-b; see APA, 2020, section 8.19).
Two Works by Two Different Authors with the Same Last Name
Citations in the body of the paper should include only the last names, unless you have
two or more resources authored by individuals with the same last name in the same year (or are
citing a personal communication). When there are two different authors with the same last name
but different first names who published in the same year, include the first initials: Brown, J.
(2009) and Brown, M. (2009) (APA, 2020, section 8.20).
Three or More Authors Cited In-Text
When referring to material that comes from three or more authors, APA-7 now requires
that all citations name just the first author’s last name followed by the words et al. (without
italics) (APA, 2020, section 8.17). Et al. is a Latin abbreviation for et alii, meaning “and others,”
which is why the word “al.” has a period, whereas “et” does not. Alone et al. (2011) stipulated
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that peacocks strut. Every single time I refer to their material, I would apply APA-7’s rule: Alone
et al. (2011) or (Alone et al., 2011). Since et al. denotes plural authors, the verb must be plural to
match, too: Alone et al. (2011) are… This applies to all citations within the body of the paper
with three or more authors.
Number of Authors in the Reference List
For resources with 20 or fewer authors in the reference list, write out all of the authors’
last names with first and middle initials, up to and including the 20th author (APA, 2020, section
9.8). APA-7 has a special rule for resources with 21 or more authors: Write out the first 19
authors’ last names with initials, insert an ellipsis (…) in place of the ampersand (&), and finish
it with the last name and initials of the last author. See example #4 provided on page 317 of your
APA-7, as well as this paper’s reference list for visuals of these variances (Acborne et al. 2011;
Kalnay et al., 1996).
Numbers
Numbers one through nine must be written out in word format (APA, 2020, section 6.33),
with some exceptions (such as ages—see section 6.32). Numbers 10 and up must be written out
in numerical format (section 6.32). Always write out in word format any number that begins a
sentence (section 6.33).
Displaying Titles of Works in-Text
The names of journals, books, plays, and other long works, if mentioned in the body of
the paper, are italicized in title case (APA, 2020, section 6.17). Titles of articles, lectures, poems,
chapters, website articles, and songs should be in title case, encapsulated by quotation marks
(section 6.7). The year of publication should follow the author’s name, whether in narrative or
parenthetical format: Perigogn and Brazel (2012) anticipated…, or (Perigogn & Brazel, 2012).
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The page or paragraph number must follow after the direct quote. Second (2015) asserted that
“paper planes can fly to the moon” (p. 13). You can restate that with a parenthetical citation as:
“Paper planes can fly to the moon” (Second, 2015, p. 13). Second (2011) is another resource by
the same author in a different year.
Primary Sources versus Secondary Sources
APA (2020) strongly advocates against using secondary sources; rather, it favors you
finding and citing the original (primary) resource whenever possible (section 8.6). On the rare
occasion that you do find it necessary to cite from a secondary source, both the primary (who
said it) and secondary (where the quote or idea was mentioned) sources should be included in the
in-text citation information. If the year of publication is known for both resources, include both
years in the citation (section 8.6). Only the secondary source should be listed in the reference
section, however. Use “as cited in” (without the quotation marks) to indicate the secondary
source. For example, James Morgan hinted that “goat milk makes the best ice cream” (as cited in
Alone, 2008, p. 117). Morgan is the primary source (he said it) and Alone is the secondary
source (he quoted what Morgan said). Only the secondary source is listed in the reference section
(Alone, and not Morgan) because if readers want to confirm the quote, they know to go to page
117 of Alone’s book.
Personal Communications
APA (2020) rationalizes the exclusion of references for information obtained through
personal communication (such as an interview, email, telephone call, postcard, text message, or
letter) in the reference list because your readers will not be able to go directly to those sources
and verify the legitimacy of the material. Instead, these items are cited only in the body of the
paper. You must include the individual’s first initial, his or her last name, the phrase “personal
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communication” (without the quotation marks), and the full date of such communication (section
8.9). As with other citations, such citations may be either narrative or parenthetical. For example,
L. Applebaum advised him to dip pretzel rolls in cheese fondue (personal communication, July
13, 2015). The alternative is that he was advised to dip pretzel rolls in cheese fondue (L.
Applebaum, personal communication, July 13, 2015). Note that there is no entry for Applebaum
in the reference list below.
Resources Canonically Numbered Sections (i.e., the Bible and Plays)
These resources should be cited in book format (APA, 2020, Section 9.42). The Bible and
other religious works are generally regarded as having no author; an annotated version would be
treated as having an editor. Include republished dates as necessary. The OWC will publish a list
of reference entries for various Bible versions on its APA Quick Guide webpage.
Bible and other Classical Works
Works such as the Bible, ancient Greek or Roman works, and other classical works like
Shakespeare must be cited in the body of the paper (APA, 2020, section 8.28). APA-7 now also
requires that they be included in the reference list, too (section 9.42), which is a significant
change from APA-6. Republished dates are included as well (see section 9.41). As such, you
would add a parenthetical phrase at the end of your reference entry with the original publication
details; note that there should be no punctuation following such parenthetical content at the end
of a reference entry (the reference entries depicting this in the reference list below are correctly
punctuated).
Citations for the Bible will include the Bible version’s name in the author’s position (as
an anonymous work), original and republished years, and then the book chapter/verse (spelled
out) in place of the page number (i.e., King James Bible, 1769/2017, Genesis 3:8)—see sections
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8.28 and 9.42. Note that APA (2020) requires book titles to be italicized in every venue,
including citations and reference entries. Because Liberty University is a distinctly-Christian
institution and many of its courses require biblical integration, most if not all of its students will
cite the Bible in virtually every course. The examples provided on pp. 274 and 325 of APA-7 are:
(note the italics in each)
• Narrative citation: King James Bible (1769/2017)
• Parenthetical citation: (King James Bible, 1769/2017, Song of Solomon 8:6)
• Reference entry: King James Bible. (2017). King James Bible Online.
https://www.kingjamesbibleonline.org/ (Original work published 1769)
Plays
When citing plays, “cite the act, scene, and line(s), in a single string, separated by
periods. For example, ‘1.3.36-37’ refers to Act 1 Scene 3, Lines 36-37” (APA, 2020, section
8.28; see also example #37 on p. 325).
Lectures and PowerPoints
APA (2020) has expanded and standardized its rules for citations and reference entries in
an effort to best credit the original sources. It now includes rules for crediting content in course
or seminar handouts, lecture notes, and PowerPoint presentations (see #102 on p. 347). When
citing a PowerPoint presentation, include the slide number rather than the page number. For
purposes of Liberty University course presentations and lectures (which are not readily available
to the public), reference each as a video lecture with the URL (if available) for the presentation,
naming the presenter(s) in the author’s position. Include the course number, lecture title, and
enough details for others to identify it within that course, in a sort of book format, naming
Liberty University as publisher. Peters (2012) is an example of this in the reference list of this
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paper. If the presenter for a Liberty University class lecture is not named, credit Liberty
University as the author; see Liberty University (2020) in the reference list below as an example.
Dictionary Entries
In keeping with its efforts to standardize reference entries, APA (2020) now requires
citation and referencing of word definitions from dictionaries to follow the same rules for
chapters in an edited book (see #47 and #48 on p. 328; section 8.13). As such, you will now
name either the individual, group, or corporate author of the dictionary in the author’s place (e.g.,
Merriam-Webster, n.d.). If you searched online, include the retrieval date and the URL to the
exact webpage. If you used a hard copy book, include the publisher details. The in-text citation
in the body of the paper would follow standard author/year format (e.g., Merriam-Webster, n.d.).
Changes in Reference Entries
There are a number of notable changes in APA-7 from past versions. For the most part,
these simplify and unify the formats to be more consistent across the different resource venues.
Some of these have already been discussed above (i.e., naming up to 19 authors’ names before
adding an ellipsis, and crediting authors and editors of classical works and dictionaries). Other
changes include italicizing names of webpages and website resources in the reference list (APA,
2020, section 6.22), as well as book titles even when named in the author’s position (such as
King James Bible). The city and state locations of publishers are no longer required; only include
those details “for works that are associated with a specific location, such as conference
presentations” (p. 297, section 9.31). Issue numbers are required for all journal articles that have
such, regardless of what page number each issue begins with (section 9.25). If two or more
publishers are listed on the copyright page, include all of them in the order listed, separated by
semicolons (section 9.29). Omit the word Author in the publisher’s place when it is the same as
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the author (section 9.24).
Electronic Sources
Note that since the APA 6th edition was published in 2010, great strides have been made
in online and electronic resource accessibility, and APA’s position on electronic resources has
shifted to embrace this. More and more resources are available electronically through the
Internet. The advent of this increased availability has resulted in APA-7’s effort to standardize
the formatting of resources, which in turn simplifies them to some extent. All reference entries
follow the same basic details: Author(s), year of publication, name of resource, and location
details (i.e., either journal name/volume/issue/page numbers, or book publisher, or webpage).
APA (2020) requires inclusion of a Digital Object Identifier (DOI) in the references
whenever available (section 9.34); if not, then a webpage, if available. In keeping with its
unification of resources, APA-7 now standardizes all DOIs and URLs to be presented in
https://doi.org/10.1177%2F1524838017742386 format. The phrase “Retrieved from” is now
excluded except when the content may have changed (such as dictionary entries, Twitter profiles,
Facebook pages; see section 9.16). APA-7 requires all hyperlinks to be active (so your reader can
click on one to go directly to that webpage), but they may appear as either blue-underlined text
or simple black text (section 9.35). There should be no period after any URL. APA-7 no longer
requires authors to break long URLs with soft returns (hold down the Shift key and press the
Enter key) at forward slashes, periods, or underscores to avoid unsightly spacing gaps, but it may
be best to do so in academic papers.
Adding Color
Though APA (2020) authorizes writers to include the use of color in photographs and
figures (section 7.26), Liberty University discourages this in academic papers. It risks becoming
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distracting for both students in their quest to be creative, and professors in their quest to focus on
academic content.
Self-Plagiarism
APA (2020) also invites writers to repurpose some of their work in future papers.
Specifically, APA-7 states that:
In specific circumstances, authors may wish to duplicate their previously used works
without quotation marks or citation …, feeling that extensive self-referencing is
undesirable or awkward and that rewording may lead to inaccuracies. When the
duplicated material is limited in scope, this approach is permissible. (p. 8.3)
APA-7 adds “Do not use quotation marks or block quotation formatting around your own
duplicated material” (p. 256).
Liberty University, however, has stringent rules against self-plagiarism, as do many
scholarly journals. Liberty University students receive grades for their class papers; those who
have received feedback and a grade from a prior professor on a prior paper have an advantage
over their classmates, both in having the benefit of that feedback/grade and in not having to write
a whole paper from scratch during the subsequent class. Student papers are also submitted to
SafeAssign to deter plagiarism. For these reasons, Liberty University expressly forbids students
using significant portions of a prior paper in a subsequent course (either a retake of the same
course or a new class altogether). It is conceivable that students who are building their
knowledge base in a subject matter—particularly at the graduate and post-graduate levels—
would reasonably justify incorporating brief excerpts from past papers into current ones. In such
case, Liberty University authorizes students to utilize APA-7’s disclosure (i.e., “I have previously
discussed”), along with a citation to the prior class paper and a reference entry (i.e., Owen, 2012;
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Yoo et al., 2016). Such self-references and re-use of content from prior papers should be used
sparingly and disclosed fully in the current paper; that content should not constitute a significant
portion of any academic assignment, however.
Final Formatting Tweaks
The templates provided by Liberty University are already formatted with proper spacing,
margins, heading level structure, and hanging indents, as necessary. With the exceptions of the
title page, figures, and equations, papers in APA format should be double-spaced throughout,
with no extra spacing between lines. Academic papers at Liberty University should also be in
one of the accepted fonts throughout (recommended: Times New Romans, 12-point font).
Sometimes when you format your paper or cut-and-paste material into it, things get skewed. One
quick way to ensure that your paper appears correct in these regards is to do a final formatting
tweak after you have completed your paper. Hold down the “Ctrl” button and press the “A” key,
which selects and highlights all of the text in your paper. Then go to the Home tab in Microsoft
Word and make sure that whichever acceptable font/size you choose to use is selected in the Font
box. Next, click on the arrow at the bottom of the Paragraph tab. Set your spacing before and
after paragraphs to “0 pt” and click the “double” line spacing. The extra spacing required on the
title page is already programmed into the template and should not change even when you
complete these actions.
Exhaustive Reference List Examples & Additional Helpful Resources
The reference list at the end of this paper includes an example of a myriad of different
sources and how each is formatted in proper APA-7 format. One example of each of the primary
types of resources will be included in the reference list, as cited in the body of this paper.
Remember that, for purposes of this paper only, many of the sources cited in the body of the
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paper were provided for illustrative purposes only and thus are fictional, so you will not be able
to locate them if you searched online. Nevertheless, in keeping with APA-7 style, all resources
cited in the body of the paper are included in the reference list and vice versa (except for personal
communications, per APA-7’s published exceptions). Be absolutely sure that every resource cited
in the body of your paper is also included in your reference list (and vice versa), excepting only
those resources with special rules, such as personal communications and primary sources you
could not access directly.
The reference list in this paper is fairly comprehensive and will include a book by one
author who also appears as one of many authors in another resource (Alone, 2008; Alone et al.,
2011); chapters in edited books (Balsam et al., 2019; Haybron, 2008; Perigogn & Brazel, 2012;
Weinstock et al., 2003); electronic version of book (Strong & Uhrbrock, 1923); electronic only
book (O’Keefe, n.d.); edited books with and without DOIs, with multiple publishers (Hacker
Hughes, 2017; Schmid, 2017); work in an anthology (Lewin, 1999); journal articles (Andrews,
2016; Carlisle, n.d.-a, n.d.-b; De Vries R. et al., 2013; McCauley & Christiansen, 2019);
newspaper article (Goldman, 2018; Guarino, 2017); online webpages (Liberty University, 2019;
Prayer, 2015); resource with corporate author as publisher (American Psychological Association,
2020); resources by two authors with the same last name but different first names in the same
year of publication (Brown, J., 2009; Brown, M., 2009); two resources by same author in the
same year (Double, 2008a, 2008b; Carlisle, n.d.-a, n.d.-b); two resources by the same author in
different years (Second, 2011, 2015); resource with 20 authors (maximum allowed by APA-7
before special rule applies) (Acborne et al., 2011); resource with 21 or more authors (Kalnay et
al., 1996); dictionary entries (American Psychological Association, n.d.; Graham, 2019;
Merriam-Webster, n.d.); Liberty University class lecture using course details (Peters, 2012);
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PowerPoint slides or lecture notes, not including course details (Canan & Vasilev, 2019); citing a
student’s paper submitted in a prior class, in order to avoid self-plagiarism (Owen, 2012);
unpublished manuscript with a university cited (Yoo et al., 2016); code of ethics (American
Counseling Association, 2014); diagnostic manual (American Psychiatric Association, 2013);
religious and classical works, including the Bible (Aristotle, 350 BC/1994; King James Bible,
1769/2017; Shakespeare, 1623/1995); dissertation or thesis (Hollander, 2017; Hutcheson, 2012);
review of a book (Schatz, 2000); video (Forman, 1975); podcast (Vedentam, 2015); recorded
webinar (Goldberg, 2018); YouTube or other streaming video (University of Oxford, 2018); clip
art or stock image (GDJ, 2018); map (Cable, 2013); photograph (McCurry, 1985); data set (Pew
Research Center, 2018); measurement instrument (Friedlander et al., 2002); manual for a test,
scale, or inventory (Tellegen & Ben-Porah, 2011); test, scale, or inventory itself (Project
Implicit, n.d.); report by a government agency or other organization (National Cancer Institute,
2018); report by individual authors at a government agency or other organization (Fried &
Polyakova, 2018); annual report (U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission, 2017); conference
session (Fistek et al., 2017); and webpages (Avramova, 2019; Centers for Disease Control and
Prevention, 2018; National Nurses United, n.d.; U.S. Census Bureau, n.d.).
Lastly, below are a few webpages that address critical topics, such as how to avoid
plagiarism and how to write a research paper. Be sure to check out Liberty University’s Online
Writing Center (https://www.liberty.edu/online/casas/writing-center/) for more tips and tools, as
well as its Facebook page (https://www.facebook.com/groups/LUOWritingCenter). Remember
that these links are only provided for your easy access and reference throughout this sample
paper, but web links and URLs should never be included in the body of scholarly papers; just in
the reference list. Writing a research paper (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zaa-PTexW2E
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or https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KNT6w8t3zDY and avoiding plagiarism
(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VeCrUINa6nU).
Conclusion
The conclusion to your paper should provide your readers with a concise summary of the
main points of your paper (though not via cut-and-pasted sentences used above). It is a very
important element, as it frames your whole ideology and gives your readers their last impression
of your thoughts. Be careful not to introduce new content in your conclusion.
After your conclusion, if you are not using the template provided by the Online Writing
Center, insert a page break at the end of the paper so that the reference list begins at the top of a
new page. Do this by holding down the “Ctrl” key and then clicking the “Enter” key. You will go
to an entirely new page in order to start the reference list. The word “References” (not in
quotation marks) should be centered and bolded. Items in the reference list are presented
alphabetically by the first author’s last name and are formatted with hanging indents (the
second+ lines of each entry are indented 1/2” from the left margin). APA authorizes the use of
singular “Reference” if you only have one resource.
3
Students would, of course, NOT include
any color-coding or footnotes in their reference entries. However, for the sake of clarity and
ease in identifying what each entry represents, each one included in the reference list of this
sample paper is color-coordinated to its corresponding footnote, with a brief description of what
each depicts.
3
https://apastyle.apa.org/instructional-aids/creating-reference-list.pdf
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References
Acborne, A., Finley, I., Eigen, K., Ballou, P., Gould, M. C., Blight, D., Callum, M., Feist, M.,
Carroll, J. E., Drought, J., Kinney, P., Owen, C., Owen, K., Price, K., Harlow, K.,
Edwards, K., Fallow, P., Pinkley, O., Finkel, F., & Gould, P. P. (2011). The emphasis of
the day after tomorrow. Strouthworks.
4
Alone, A. (2008). This author wrote a book by himself. Herald Publishers.
5
Alone, A., Other, B., & Other, C. (2011). He wrote a book with others, too: Arrange
alphabetically with the sole author first, then the others. Herald Publishers.
6
American Counseling Association. (2014). 2014 ACA code of ethics.
https://www.counseling.org/knowledge-center
7
American Psychiatric Association. (2013). Diagnostic and statistical manual of mental disorders
(5th ed.). https://www.doi.org/10.1176/appi.books.9780890425596
8
American Psychological Association. (n.d.). Positive transference. In APA dictionary of
psychology. Retrieved August 31, 2019, from https://dictionary.apa.org/positive-
transference
9
American Psychological Association. (2020). Publication manual of the American Psychological
Association (7th ed.). https://doi.org/10.1037/0000165-000
10
4
Resource with 20 authors (maximum allowed by APA before special rule applies).
5
Entry by author who also appears as one of many authors in another resource (single author
appears first in list).
6
Multiple authors appear after same single-author resource.
7
Code of ethics.
8
Diagnostic manual.
9
Entry in a dictionary, thesaurus, or encyclopedia, with group author.
10
Resource with corporate author as publisher.
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Andrews, P. M. (2016). Congruence matters. Educational Leadership, 63(6), 12-15.
11
Aristotle. (1994). Poetics (S. H. Butcher, Trans.). The internet Classics Archive.
http://classics.mit.edu/Aristotle/poetics.html (Original work published ca. 350 B.C.E.)
12
Avramova, N. (2019, January 3). The secret to a long, happy, heathy life? Think age-positive.
CNN. https://www.cnn.com/2019/01/03/health/respect-toward-elderly-leads-to-long-life-
intl/index.html
13
Balsam, K. F., Martell, C. R., Jones, K. P., & Safren, S. A. (2019). Affirmative cognitive
behavior therapy with sexual and gender minority people. In G. Y. Iwamasa & P. A.
Hays (Eds.), Culturally responsive cognitive behavior therapy: Practice a supervision
(2nd ed., pp. 287-314). American Psychological Association.
https://doi.org/10.1037/0000119-012
14
Benoit, M., Bouthillier, D., Moss, E., Rousseau, C., & Brunet, A. (2010). Emotion regulation
strategies as mediators of the association between level of attachment security and PTSD
symptoms following trauma in adulthood. Anxiety, Stress, and Coping, 23(1), 101-118.
http://dx.doi.org/10.1080/10615800802638279
Brown, J. (2009). Ardent anteaters. Brockton.
Brown, M. (2009). Capricious as a verb. Journal of Grammatical Elements, 28(6), 11-12.
15
11
Journal article without DOI, from most academic research databases or print version.
12
Ancient Greek or Roman work.
13
Webpage on a news website.
14
Chapter in an edited book with DOI.
15
Resources by two authors with the same last name but different first names in the same year of
publication. Arrange alphabetically by the first initials.
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Cable, D. (2013). The racial dot map [Map]. University of Virginia, Weldon Cooper Center for
Public Service. https://demographics.coopercenter.org/Racial-Dot-Map
16
Canan, E., & Vasilev, J. (2019, May 22). [Lecture notes on resource allocation]. Department of
Management Control and Information Systems, University of Chile. https:// uchilefau.
academia.edu/ElseZCanan
17
Carlisle, M. A. (n.d.-a). Erin and the perfect pitch. Journal of Music, 21(3), 16-17. http:// make-
sure-it-goes-to-the-exact-webpage-of-the-source-otherwise-don’t-include
18
Carlisle, M. A. (n.d.-b). Perfect pitch makes sweet music. Journal of Music, 24(8), 3-6. http://
make-sure-it-goes-to-the-exact-webpage-of-the-source-otherwise-don’t-include
Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. (2018, January 23). People at high risk of
developing flu-related complications. https://www.cdc.gov/flu/highrisk/index.htm
19
De Vries R., Nieuwenhuijze, M., Buitendijk, S. E., & the members of Midwifery Science Work
Group. (2013). What does it take to have a strong and independent profession of
midwifery? Lessons from the Netherlands. Midwifery, 29(10), 1122-1128.
https://doi.org/10.1016/j.midw.2013.07.007
20
Double, C. (2008a). This is arranged alphabetically by the name of the title. Peters.
Double, C. (2008b). This is the second (“the” comes after “arranged”). Peters.
21
16
Map.
17
PowerPoint slides or lecture notes.
18
Online journal article with a URL and no DOI; also depicts one of two resources by the same
author with no known publication date.
19
Webpage on a website with a group author.
20
Journal article with a DOI, combination of individual and group authors.
21
Two resources by same author in the same year. Arrange alphabetically by the title and then
add lowercase letters (a and b, respectively here) to the year.
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Fistek, A., Jester, E., & Sonnenberg, K. (2017, July 12-15). Everybody’s got a little music in
them: Using music therapy to connect, engage, and motivate [Conference session].
Autism Society National Conference, Milwaukee, WI, United States.
https://asa.confex.com/asa/2017/webprogramarchives/Session9517.html
22
Forman, M. (Director). (1975). One flew over the cuckoo’s nest [Film]. United Artists.
23
Fried, D., & Polyakova, A. (2018). Democratic defense against disinformation. Atlantic Council.
https://www.atlanticcouncil.org/in-depth-research-reports/report/democratic-defense-
against-disinformation/
24
Friedlander, M. L., Escudero, V., & Heatherton, L. (2002). E-SOFTA: System for observing
family therapy alliances [Software and training videos] [Unpublished instrument].
http://www.softa-soatif.com/
25
GDJ. (2018). Neural network deep learning prismatic [Clip art]. Openclipart.
https://openclipart.org/detail/309343/neural-network-deep-learning-prismatic
26
Goldberg, J. F. (2018). Evaluating adverse drug effects [Webinar]. American Psychiatric
Association. https://education.psychiatry.org/Users/ProductDetails.aspx?
ActivityID=6172
27
Goldman, C. (2018, November 28). The complicate calibration of love, especially in adoption.
22
Conference session.
23
Video.
24
Report by individual authors at a government agency or other organization.
25
Measurement instrument.
26
Clip art or stock image.
27
Webinar, recorded.
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Chicago Tribune.
28
Graham, G. (2019). Behaviorism. In E. N. Zalta (Ed.), The Stanford encyclopedia of philosophy
(Summer 2019 ed.). Stanford University.
https://plato.stanford.edu/archives/sum2019/entries/behaviorism
29
Guarino, B. (2017, December 4). How will humanity react to alien life? Psychologists have some
predictions. The Washington Post. https://www.washingtonpost.com/news/speaking-of-
science/wp/2017/12/04/how-will-humanity-react-to-alien-life-psychologists-have-some-
predictions/
30
Hacker Hughes, J. (Eds.). (2017). Military veteran psychological health and social care:
Contemporary approaches. Routledge.
31
Haybron, D. M. (2008). Philosophy and the science of subjective well-being. In M. Eid & R. J.
Larsen (Eds.), The science of subjective well-being (pp. 17-43). Guilford Press.
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lag structures and language skills.
TRANSFORMATION VIEW 1
Transformation View and Christian Psychology
Ryan M. Harmon
Doctor of Philosophy in Psychology, Liberty University
Author Note
No conflict of interest exists concerning this paper
TRANSFORMATION VIEW 2
Abstract
When something is changed from one form or appearance to another, it is transformed. In
the Christian context, transformation can be used to refer to a change in character or behavior
from one that is bad to better. For instance, when someone reforms from being a sinner to being
saved and accepts to change his evil ways and adopt the Christian way of living, they can be said
to have undergone a transformation. Understanding the concept of transformation and the
transformation view is instrumental in helping understand whether the transformation view will
be better standing alone than being integrated with Christian psychology. Establishing the
reasons why it works better as its own viewpoint or integrating it with other viewpoints can be
achieved through further research on what the transformational viewpoint entails.
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Table of Contents
Abstract ......................................................................................................................................2
Transformation View and Christian Psychology ..........................................................................4
Christian psychology uses Biblical teachings in explaining human behavior, while the
transformation view emphasizes the exploration of the opportunities in the world as a way of
Glorifying God ............................................................................................................................4
Some Characteristics of the Transformation view are in line with Christian Psychology ..............6
The foundation of the Transformation view and Christian Psychology is based on scriptural
truths ...........................................................................................................................................7
The Transformation view shares the same goal as the integration view ........................................9
Conclusion ................................................................................................................................ 10
References ................................................................................................................................ 12
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Transformation View and Christian Psychology
The transformation view is defined as a view of psychology that values and emphasizes
the idea of caring for the soul while maintaining respect for the historical aspects of psychology
and traditions and relates psychology with a moral view of faith and psychology (Johnson,
2010). The transformation view in the study and practice of psychology supports the notion that
we are our own limitation in that human beings are the ones who hold themselves back from
exploring everything that the world has to offer. This means that in order to achieve a
transformation, we must be open-minded when it comes to exploring the different aspects of the
world. Christian psychology, according to Myers, refers to the view that is held by conservative
Christians who believe that their understanding of humanity should only be guided by the
Biblical scriptures through the life, works, and teachings of Jesus Christ (Wolters, 2005, p.7).
The transformation view presents a scientific approach which emphasizes the use of our minds to
worship God by using scientific tools to explore humanity (Johnson, 2010, p. 229). This paper
seeks to discuss the transformation view and Christian psychology and establish whether the
Transformation view should stand as its own viewpoint on the relationship between Christianity
and psychology or should it be contained within the Christian psychology view.
Christian psychology uses Biblical teachings in explaining human behavior, while the
transformation view emphasizes the exploration of the opportunities in the world as a way
of Glorifying God.
The transformation view should be part of the Christian psychology view in terms of how
they explain the relationship between Christianity and Psychology. The transformation view
explains the relationship between Christianity and psychology by talking about the influence of
the scriptures on how people use the resources and knowledge that God has given them, like
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scientific knowledge, to explore human understanding, while the Christian psychology view is
more conservative and believes that human behavior should be guided by the Biblical teachings
and nothing else (Johnson, 2010, p. 229). Therefore, making the transformation view part of the
Christian psychology view will help create a more unified understanding of Christianity and
psychology. In explaining human behavior, Christian Psychology integrates theology and science
in that it bases the explanation of human behavior on the Christian and biblical teachings like the
teachings of Jesus Christ. The transformation view is focused on transforming science into an
actual faith by encouraging people to explore the opportunities that have been presented to them
in the world out there as a way of worshipping God. This means using the knowledge that God
has given them to explore the various aspects of the world as a way of glorifying him, an
indication that the transformation view establishes Christianity and Psychology as closely related
concepts that can work together in understanding humanity. For example, using the scientific
knowledge that God has given them with the scriptures as the basis of their beliefs to explore the
scientific evidence which explains human behavior and living by the scriptures (Wolters, 2005,
p.7). The transformation view should not stand alone because it emphasizes the exploration of
the scientific aspect of the world by recognizing that it is God-given to explain human behavior,
while Christian psychology bases the explanation of human behavior on Biblical teachings,
which means that the eventual outcomes that they both seek are to glorify God by encouraging
people to lead their lives in ways that are appealing to God, guided by the Biblical teachings in
their behavior and exploring the various aspects of the world that have been provided to them by
God to glorify God. They are both focused on ensuring that people do good either by living
according to the scriptures by using the way Jesus lived his life as an example or by using the
resources that God has provided them to explore the world without holding back.
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Some Characteristics of the Transformation view are in line with Christian Psychology
The transformation view has some characteristics that are closely connected to the
Christian psychology view of how Christianity and psychology relate, making their integration
possible for the generation of desirable behavioral outcomes, especially when guiding someone
towards leading a life that is more righteous as they both derive their roots from both Christianity
and Religion (Brown & Miller, 2005). The Christian psychology view sees the main goal of life
as achieving spirituality in the image of Jesus Christ when it comes to human behavior
influenced by the Biblical facts like the text in 2 Corinthians 3:18, which says, "And we all, who
with unveiled faces contemplate the Lord’s glory, are being transformed into his image with
ever-increasing glory, which comes from the Lord, who is the Spirit” (New International
Version, 1973, 2 Corinthians, 3: 18). This means that Christian psychology is about encouraging
individuals to behave in ways that are in line with the life and teachings of Jesus Christ and be
guided by the Holy Spirit in their lives so that they can lead a righteous life as per the teachings
of the scriptures. This verse also seeks to encourage individuals in that if they lead righteous
lives as per the Biblical teachings, they will be transformed into the image of Christ and live in
glory. Christian psychology gets used in counseling to lead individuals towards leading a more
Christian way of life as per the teachings of Jesus Christ and in accordance with what the Bible
teaches to be rightful in the eyes of God. On the other hand, the transformation view sees
psychology as simply showing an act of love and encourages individuals to exercise care for
their soul and is more focused on living and practicing Christianity than living in a Christian
way. Therefore, the integration of Christian psychology and the transformation view in
discussing Christianity and Psychology would result in the creation of an enhanced
understanding of psychology and Christianity from both aspects of life where the two views can
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contribute to each other and establish a more unified view of Psychology and Christianity. While
some of the characteristics of the transformation view may not be synonymous with the Christian
worldview, like, in terms of how they see psychology and leading a Christian way of life, the
difference in the characteristics will play a significant role in helping create a unified
understanding of Christianity and psychology when the transformation view is integrated to form
part of the Christina Psychology view.
The foundation of the Transformation view and Christian Psychology is based on
scriptural truths
The transformation view respects the historical aspects and traditions of psychology in
that, according to Jones, the traditions provide us with ways to understand the objective reality
which exists without our perceptions of realism (Johnson, 2010, P. 230). It should not stand
alone because, just like the Christian psychology view, its foundation explaining the relationship
between Christianity and psychology is based on the truths about humanity established in the
Biblical scriptures influenced by its commitment to the authority of the Bible, making its
fundamental basis similar to the basis that influences the formation of the concepts of Christian
Psychology (Johnson, 2010, p. 227). According to Jones, different denominations may have
different understandings of different aspects but may agree on the fundamentals resulting in
different understandings of what is taught in the scriptures concerning humanity, creating room
for them to explore other available ways of answering the questions that they cannot answer
based on their individual understandings (Johnson, 2010, p. 187). In the case of the
transformation view and the Christian Psychology view, their understandings of the relationship
between Christianity and psychology may have some different aspects which they may not agree
on, like living life as Christ did in Christian psychology and using what God has given
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individuals to explore the world, they agree on the fundamentals in the sense that they both are
focused on glorifying God either by living as Christ did or by glorifying God by using the
resources and gifts he has given humanity.
Therefore, the transformation view should not stand on its own viewpoint on the
relationship between Christianity and psychology and should be contained within the Christian
psychology view because they both share the basic foundation, which is the foundation of
scriptural truths which they use in their explanations of how Christianity and psychology relate
(Johnson, 2010, p. 227). The transformation view uses Christian concepts like exploring what
God has given human beings and using it to glorify God. This fits into the Christian psychology
view because the teachings about using the knowledge and other resources that God has given us
to serve him are established in the Biblical scriptures in 1 Peter 4:10-11 which says, “Each of you
should use whatever gift you have received to serve others, as faithful stewards of God's grace in
its various forms. If anyone speaks, they should do so as one who speaks the very words of God.
If anyone serves, they should do so with the strength God provides so that in all things God may
be praised through Jesus Christ. To him be the glory and the power for ever and ever. Amen”
(New International Version, 1973, 1 Peter 4:10-11). This means that since the basis of the
formation of the transformation view on psychology and Christianity is the Biblical scriptures,
then it would make sense to have it contained within the Christian psychology view instead of
having it stand as its own worldview when used in establishing the relationship that exists
between Christianity and psychology.
Myers argues that transformational psychologists and Christian psychologists can work
together in understanding humanity in that the transformational psychologists can acquire new
knowledge of humanity through scientific research, then the Christian explanation of the origins
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of modern science based on the scriptures can prepare us to respect and appreciate the scientific
revelations, resulting in the realities of faith making it possible to do psychology based on reality
and not our perceived needs and fantasies (Johnson, 2010, p. 227). This means that with the
transformation view forming part of the Christian psychology view, the Biblical and scientific
truths can be used to explain humanity from the Christian and psychological perspectives based
on reality established from scientific and Biblical facts derived from Christian psychology and
the transformation view. Myers believes that the psychologist who applies the transformation
view does both psychology and Christianity while maintaining respect for religion as religion
and science as science and building bridges between them to facilitate the effective integration of
the concepts of the transformation view into the Christian psychology view (Johnson, 2010, p.
228). This becomes instrumental for Christian psychologists in that they can now combine the
Biblical facts with the truths established by science to establish a new reality that can help
facilitate the establishment of a better understanding of how Christianity and psychology relate
in their explanation of the nature of humanity.
The Transformation view shares the same goal as the integration view
The goal of the transformation view is similar to the goal of the integration approach in
that they both seek to achieve a unified psychology of reality when talking about the relationship
between Christianity and religion (Johnson, 2010, p. 230). This means that transformation
psychologists would willingly integrate with another approach to explaining humanity to come
up with a more complex and unified understanding of reality. Both the transformation view and
the integration approach seek to unify with the goal of creating something more complex in its
unified form, in the integration of the Christian concepts and psychological science to enhance
the eventual outcomes that would be generated in Christian psychology (Johnson, 2010, p. 230).
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In this case, the goal is to achieve an enhanced understanding of humanity. Since the
transformation approach supports the unification of varying concepts to establish something
complex, it would not be a good idea for it to stand as its own viewpoint because it would not
achieve the desired complexity outcome in explaining the relationship between Christianity and
religion and how they can be integrated to create a new reality in the understanding of humanity.
As such, having it contained within the view of Christian psychology will help achieve an
enhanced level of complexity when it comes to explaining humanity in the Christian and
psychological views through the integration of Biblical facts and psychology traditions. Jones
also states that he approaches psychology with commitments that are grounded on Biblical
teachings while also recognizing that there is a lot that could be learned from psychology and
science (Johnson, 2010, p. 277). This means that he agrees with the integration of some aspects
of science into Christian psychology, like the aspects of the transformation view into the
Christian psychology view, to establish an improved understanding of humanity.
Conclusion
The discussion above presents detailed reasons why the transformation view should not
stand alone as its own viewpoint when it comes to explaining the relationship between
Christianity and Psychology. When it stands on its own, the transformation view would not be
able to provide a strong explanation of the relationship between Christianity and psychology on
its own because as much as the basis of the view that individuals should use what God has given
them to explore humanity is based on the Biblical scriptures which say it is a way of glorifying
him, the view places more focus on science and less on religion. Christian psychology, on the
other hand, is more conservative and explains humanity in terms of doing what the scriptures
teach by acting as Christ did. This presents a situation where both views are missing something,
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which means that they would present insufficient and probably biased approaches in explaining
the relationship between Christianity and psychology. Therefore, as much as the transformation
view may be based on Biblical scriptures in its approach to scientific research and psychology,
having it stand alone as its own worldview would not provide a sufficient or conclusive
understanding of the explanations of psychology and Christianity. There are likely to be some
gaps and unanswered questions concerning either psychology or Christianity in its explanations
of their relationship. Getting the transformation view to form part of the Christian psychology
view would create a unified understanding of the relationship between psychology and
Christianity to help avoid the existence of conflicting views from both approaches. Christian
psychology is more conservative about applying Biblical doctrines, while the transformation
view seems to lean more towards exploring the world, including science, in understanding
humanity. Therefore, when the two views are combined to create one unified understanding of
how Christianity and psychology relate, the outcome will be stronger, leading them to create a
better explanation of the relationship between Christianity and psychology.
.
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