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In reviewing your study for a peer review, as per this week's assignments I
found some strengths as well as some errors that will need your attention as
you edit your document. Please see below for some constructive notes on
your study:
Strengths:
• Your paper was well written with your sample size clearly stated
• Your paper provided a clear overview of your survey and its purpose
Weaknesses:
• Under analysis, you are referring to your study in future tense the
study is missing the results (see week 6 assignment, section 2.c) as
well as the required tables
• Limitations of your study were not addressed (see week 6
assignment, section 2.b)
• On page two, you refer to five authors, listing them by last name.
This is acceptable when referring to three or less authors, however,
when there are more than three authors, the use of 'et al' is
appropriate (Purdue University, 2019)
• While reviewing your results and discussion section for this weeks’
assignment, I found there were a good amount of strengths and a few
errors. These errors should not be too hard to fix. Just making sure to
review the APA Manual for some extra guidance should allow you to
easily fix those errors.
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• Strength:
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proper terms.
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purpose of the study and how the demographics related to the variables
as well.
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• Weaknesses:
• - There are a few errors here and there for punctuation that should be
looked over and reviewed.
• - Unfortunately, I did not see a discussion or the results section within
your paper either. This was also part of the week 6 assignment. Make
sure to always have all of the information asked.
• - There were also no graphs or tables that were presented in this
section. Make sure to have at least two tables or graphs with proper
APA titles, notes, and citations. You can find the proper formatting in
last week’s video from Dr. St. Peters
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I hope you find this review helpful as your progress further into your studies.
References:
American Psychological Association. (2020). Publication manual of the American
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Writing Lab, P. U. (2019). In-Text Citations. Purdue Writing Lab.
https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/research_and_citation/apa_style/apa_formatting_and_style
_guide/in_text_citations_author_authors.html
