a research paper review

I felt like the paper was not as professional, and very repetitive. I found it redundant and my work is always pretty close to excellent and I would like to see a great result. my paper fixed as soon as possible

I felt like you did not have enough informatiion to talk about those medical devices, if that is the case, please choose another one, there is plenty. I dont know if you understand but my professor is graduated from medical school and i am a 4th year biomedical engineer and like I said, it does not look like I wrote it because my writing always gets me the highest scores. 

*there is a lot of information on heart valve implants, if you want to talk about that
*if you can do 6 and a half pages without counting the first page or the reference page

this is the instructin i was given to mr blessedWriter so you have to do in the same manner

CHECK OUT THE RED LINES AND MAKE IT PERFECT

 this time i want to make it perfect so please do it ASAP

MY PAYMENT REFUND RATIO IS ALREADY REACHED TO 15% SO DO NOT SAY HI IF YOU CAN NOT DO IT