Fixing essays

I have two essys that i need someone to fix it and add to it as the promt asked.

What I mean is, I just upload two promt and two essays. Promt 1 for polish_draft_1. That's the first essay that u should read the promt before fixing the polish_draft_1. (I WANT U TO READ THE PROMT FIRST)

The same thing for the sconed essay. read Promt_2 for doing poished_Draft_2. 

I need 3 grammer mistakes AND SIMPLE english. 

I have the essays but i want u to fix the essays as the promt says