Week 5 Assignment

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Week 1 Feedback

Numeric Grade:  12.58 / 13  pts

Weighted Average (Earned/Possible):

12.58 % / 13 %

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Great job on the paper! I'd love to see you go into more detail about the competition and how Gap fights the competition.

(2.64 / 3) Explanation of the background section from the marketing plan outline including a discussion on how each component contributes to the overall success of the organization.

Proficient - Clearly explains the background and includes some discussion on how each component contributes to the overall success of the organization.

(3 / 3) Explanation of the market needs section from the marketing plan outline including a discussion on how each component contributes to the overall success of the organization.

Distinguished - Completely explains the market needs and thoroughly discusses how each component contributes to the overall success of the organization.

(3 / 3) Explanation of the market section from the marketing plan outline including a discussion on how each component contributes to the overall success of the organization.

Distinguished - Extensively explains the market section; thoroughly examines and discusses the components of the section. Discusses how each component contributes to the overall success of the organization.

(0.44 / 0.5) Critical Thinking: Explanation of Issues

Proficient - Clearly explains in details the issue to be considered, delivering enough relevant information for an adequate understanding.

(0.5 / 0.5) Critical Thinking: Evidence

Distinguished - Employs persuasive information from credible source(s), to develop an ample analysis or synthesis of the topic. Viewpoints of experts are scrutinized thoroughly.

(0.5 / 0.5) Written Communication: Sources and Evidence

Distinguished - Demonstrates consistent use of reliable, appropriate sources and/or evidence to support ideas that are situated within the discipline and genre of the writing.

(1 / 1) Written Communication: Control of Syntax and Mechanics

Distinguished - Displays meticulous comprehension and organization of syntax and mechanics, such as spelling and grammar. Written work contains no errors, and is very easy to understand. 

(0.5 / 0.5) APA Formatting

Distinguished - Accurately uses APA formatting consistently throughout the paper, title and reference page.

(0.5 / 0.5) Page Requirement

Distinguished - The paper meets the specific page requirement stipulated in the assignment description.

(0.5 / 0.5) Resource Requirement

Distinguished - Provides ample resources and uses the correct amount of sources from the specified search agent.

Overall Score: 12.58 / 13

Week 2 Feedback

Numeric Grade:  12.88 / 13  pts

Weighted Average (Earned/Possible):

12.88 % / 13 %

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Great job on the paper! I would get into a little bit more detail about the mission. Make sure you also proofread. 

(6 / 6) Explanation of the company section from the marketing plan outline including a discussion on how each component contributes to the overall success of the organization.

Distinguished - Completely explains the components of the company and thoroughly examines and discusses the section. Discusses how each component contributes to the overall success of the organization.

(3.5 / 3.5) Explanation of the competition section from the marketing plan outline including a discussion on how each component contributes to the overall success of the organization.

Distinguished - Comprehensively explains the components of the competition section and thoroughly discusses how each component contributes to the overall success of the organization.

(0.44 / 0.5) Critical Thinking: Explanation of Issues

Proficient - Clearly explains in details the issue to be considered, delivering enough relevant information for an adequate understanding.

(0.44 / 0.5) Critical Thinking: Evidence

Proficient - Employes applicable information from credible source(s), to develop an analysis of the topic.

(1 / 1) Written Communication: Control of Syntax and Mechanics

Distinguished - Displays meticulous comprehension and organization of syntax and mechanics, such as spelling and grammar. Written work contains no errors, and is very easy to understand.

(0.5 / 0.5) APA Formatting

Distinguished - Accurately uses APA formatting consistently throughout the paper, title and reference page.

(0.5 / 0.5) Page Requirement

Distinguished - The paper meets the specific page requirement stipulated in the assignment description.

(0.5 / 0.5) Resource Requirement

Distinguished - Provides ample resources and uses the correct amount of sources from the specified search agent.

Overall Score: 12.88 / 13

Week 3 Feedback

Numeric Grade:  12.50 / 13  pts

Weighted Average (Earned/Possible):

12.50 % / 13 %

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Great job! I'd like to see you go into a little bit more detail about messaging.

(9.5 / 9.5) Explanation of the marketing strategy section from the marketing plan outline, including a discussion on how each component contributes to the overall success of the organization.

Distinguished - Perfectly explains the components of the marketing strategy section and thoroughly discusses how each component contributes to the overall success of the organization.

(0.5 / 0.5) Critical Thinking: Explanation of Issues

Distinguished - Clearly and comprehensively explains in detail the issue to be considered, delivering all relevant information necessary for full understanding.

(0.5 / 0.5) Integrative Learning: Connections to Discipline

Distinguished - Autonomously synthesizes or draws conclusions by combining examples, facts, or theories from multiple disciplines.

(1 / 1) Written Communication: Control of Syntax and Mechanics

Distinguished - Displays meticulous comprehension and organization of syntax and mechanics, such as spelling and grammar. Written work contains no errors, and is very easy to understand.

(0.5 / 0.5) APA Formatting

Distinguished - Accurately uses APA formatting consistently throughout the paper, title and reference page.

(0.5 / 0.5) Page Requirement

Distinguished - The paper meets the specific page requirement stipulated in the assignment description.

(0 / 0.5) Resource Requirement

Overall Score: 12.5 / 13

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