Writing Activity 3 Rough Draft

 Section 1Rough DraftCreate your Rough Draft by using the writing templates in Webtext chapter 7.  Your rough draft should include an introduction paragraph, 2-5 body paragraphs for all supporting points in your paper, a counter perspective, and a conclusion paragraph. While the rough draft should be complete, it does not have to be perfect. After you submit it, you will get feedback from your instructor to help make revisions before submitting the final version of your paper in week nine. 

*** I included my paper but I would like a better revision on my paper. It doesnt have to be long as I have it.... If you think you can reword what I have then please do.