This final version of your mini-portfolio/essays

For this assignment, I will give you my first draft and how will the teacher's grading this assignment. you need to make changes in my first darft, in order to meet up all the requirement.  My draft is  aframing essay that introduces the reader to the artifacts and explains their significance. Be as specific as possible in explaining to the reader how the artifacts you chose evince your abilities with regard to Writing & Communication. Remember that your reader will be unfamiliar with your work so you will need to describe it (rather than simply gesturing toward it).  The BIS 284 is the paper that I wrote before, so you can only drag examples from it to how I learned the learning objective( Writing & Communication) from it. I need it in 6 hours, for $20.