Rewrite an essay due tomorrow 8am!

thesis change: set up an sex and gender course as a required course as math and writing

Argument 1 : The course can help students better understand themselves and answer some questions, like “Who I Am?” or “Am I Boy/Girls?”

Argument 2: Develop empathy & good for your future career

Argument 3: (can be it will train student’s critical thinking and help them understand the society and some hot point issues better)

I want an brand new beginning part and add a structure of “they say I say”

For argument 1&2 I already had in my essay and you just need to organize them better,

And for argument 3 you can use my idea or think of another argument

And think another conclusion

Thanks????