revision the reflective report in 24 h

so im posting the feedback of my teacher in red should follow it and make sure to not be descriptive and try to be around 1600-1700  words max not more plz ... 

you follow what she asked and make sure you make it structured well ...

i will post also a student reflective report lz check and see how he did it he used different model and theories but the structure should be same check how he used the theories and how he applied them check also the personal development plan how he linked it int the text and how he did it in the appendix follow this structure plz ..

whatever you do for good manager experience you do for bad manger