Revision

1) Observe this link and write about it ( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4SwebA5cxIQ )

2) Interview a Fake named ( Ashraf Alsayed ) and put the answers of these question in the essay and mention him as if he answers them.

What kind of genre are used      (reports, assignment sheets, arguments, proposals, research, etc.)

Why are these genres used? What do      they offer that others don’t?

What is the main purpose of      writing in this community?

How is writing shaped by that?

Does collaboration ever happen? In      what circumstances and how is it carried out?

3) Compare and contrast both of the observation and the interview and write it down

And this is the comment of the professor :

Omar, you have a great start! You cover the basics, but will likely need to go into a little more detail. I see that you haven't added your interview or observation yet, so this will likely help you fill in the gaps. Additionally, you may want to revise some of your sentence structures. You often use commas between clauses instead of connecting them, which becomes confusing. Keep up the good work!