Revising a Short Completed Criminal Justice Research Paper

For this assignment, I have composed an essay that has been reviewed by a tutor at the Walden University's writing center. I need someone to revise my essay by using the advice and notes already given inside the document provided by the Walden tutor. Inside the document, you will see the first page has the assignment's instructions, followed by the essay, and the last paragraph of the document contains feedback that needs to be utilized in the revision of the assignment by the tutor, as well as using the feedback and link providing on the side in the notes section by the tutor.