revise essay

revise the essay according to the following instruction

RECOMMENDATIONS AND STRATEGIES FOR IMPROVEMENT

FOCUS/STATEMENT OF PURPOSE:

The directions for this statement require one sentence, consider revising to fit the requirement.

In this location, give the reader one sentence that tells the problem and potential solution to be featured in your Recommendation Report.

Following Assignment Guidelines:

There is no need for a separate Reference page because this is information is provided in the Annotated Bibliography.

Do not use 1st person at any point during this assignment

• 3rd person point of view

ANNOTATED BIBLIOGRAPHY:

Following APA Guidelines:

Double check the APA directions for citing internet sources.  Please revise for the final draft.  Refer to your Writer’s Reference for guidance. https://guides.lib.unc.edu/citing-information/apa-sample

Typically, bold is not used for citations. Check the capitalization requirements on all of the titles. For example: Hastings, J., & Mitchell, O. S. (2020). How financial literacy and impatience shape retirement wealth and investment behaviours. Journal of Pension Economics & Finance, 19(1), 1-20.

Titles are typically written this way: Hastings, J., & Mitchell, O. S. (2020). How Financial Literacy and Impatience Shape Retirement Wealth and Investment Behaviours. Journal of Pension Economics & Finance, 19(1), 1-20.