Revise and supplement a draft to a final draft

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  1. Make a good connection between each paragraph instead of “firstly/secondly…”
  2. Add more evidence toward each body paragraph
  3. Delete those sentence which actually means nothing. if u think the whole paragraph is not good, u can delete whole paragraph.
  4. Improve the essay from a draft to a final draft
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