Revise and reduce paper to 6 pages

Revise this SOUL PORTRAIT paper. 

-Edit and revise the sentences, grammar

-Reduce paper from 10 pages to 6 pages

-A Sample paper is provided for a guide that got an A

 About to the student:

If required, please change the portrait. I described the student below and provided most of the information in my assignment. I know I put all my story in my assignment.

The sample one I provided got A for the assignment.

About myself:

I am single male and not married. Living alone in USA. My deepest problem and holding me back in my life is LONELINESS. Currently, working for State agency and my work is always high pressure. Its difficult to maintain the WORK LIFE balance.

Notes from the course:

1). What did I learn from this class?

2). What will I apply?

Impress with your depth & integration by covering the below questions in your paper.

 a. What worked? Learned about self / others

 b. What's in your life changes? Switched On/OFF

 c. Turning off negatives

 d. Concepts that will learn

 e. Curiosity GRIT? Can trust people?

 f. What changed in me? Open, Closed, bugs thrown away?