Revise and add some content

Hi I have finished a part of my final draft of my paper and only need to revise and add some content to my paper. I need more than 600 words. The prompt and rubric of the paper is below. And the attached is the part I have finished.

Prompt: Do you tend to speak up? Identify a context or situation in which you tend to speak up or refrain 

from speaking up. Discuss why you choose to speak up or not to speak up in that particular 

context.

In crafting your response, consider how factors such as personality, feelings, family, culture, 

education, and/or societal pressure may affect your decision. 

While writing your paper, you may find it helpful to refer to the following chapters in 

Knowing 

Language

: Chapter 3 (Argumentative Writing), Chapter 12 (Writing Cohesively), Chapter 13 

(Revising, Editing, and Polishing Your Writing).

Rubric:

Content and Organisation:

Includes adequate introductory information about the topic 

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Includes a clear thesis that responds to the prompt appropriately

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Organizes and develops the topic/argument logically and thoughtfully 

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Demonstrates understanding of the class text, connecting it to the topic 

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Makes sufficient use of the class text for support

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Reflects original ideas and critical thinking

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Includes a conclusion that engages the readers

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Demonstrates progress through the drafting process

Presentation and Language:

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Uses tenses correctly

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Uses specific verbs such as 

claims, argues, suggests

as well as appropriate vocabulary

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Varies sentence structure effectively and uses cohesive devices such as pronoun 

reference, transitions, and parallelism appropriately

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Is well edited for grammar: few basic errors with nouns, verbs, pronouns, and 

prepositions

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Follows punctuation and MLA conventions, including correct use of quotation marks

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Shows improvement in grammar and punctuation during the drafting process