Review of Documented Argument Draft April

Examples attached below along with reviewed paper 

looking for some specifics about what  plan on editing and how to incorporate teachers feedback feedback. 
This is how you could have received more clear feedback from your peers as well.  

Review carefully the comments offered by your professor on your second draft of the Documented Argument, and identify two sections that you feel you can make stronger in the final draft.  Post the sections for your peers to review and in a well-crafted paragraph describe what you will do to strengthen those sections.  Be specific and focus on both big picture issues and matters of organization and transitions. 

• Make initial post
• 250-300 words