Racial Disparities

I already did the paper I just need someone to make corrections and add information to make my paper complete.  I will send you my first draft with the things that need to be changed. 

Things that need to be changed in my paper are..

*lower case (any words highlighted needs to be lower cased, not capitalized). 

* find a source that fits.

*please expand on the relevance of the cases I cited. 

*need to add counterarguments.  A Critical part of your position is to explore a counterargument that suggest police, or the system are not biased entities. There is countervailing evidence to suggest that it is completely fair. Doing this will strengthen the paper. 

*paper shifts from police to other aspects of the system. please use transitions. it will be easier to focus on police bias as policing seems to be most addressed. The paper will be improved by narrowing in on one specific part of the system. State that there is systemic bias as I did but focus on (police). 

*grammatical errors 

*transition sentenced needed between the paragraphs. 

*common nouns are NOT to be capitalized

*when referring to the police officers, generally, those words are not capitalized. when referring to Officer Smith, the proper noun is capitalized. PLEASE CORRECT THIS THROUGH THE PAPER. 

*fix reference page. These titles should NOT be capitalized. Even if they are capitalized in the actual article, DO NOT capitalize them in the reference page. 

* A conclusion should summarize and highlight the most important points established in the body of the paper and state how these points support the thesis.