Quick Review and Edit to my Personal Statement for my masters application

Im looking for someone to review my personal statement for my masters application. If you feel like theres no need for edits to be made thats fine. Im mainly looking to see if this is good enough to submit. If you feel like theres things that need to be fixed please fix for me.

Prompt 

1. What are your reasons for applying to Rutgers University School of Social Work? Discuss how your personal, professional, and/or community experiences and values affected your decision.
2. Select and describe a social problem of concern to you and describe how you believe professional social workers can help alleviate this issue.
3. What skills and strengths would you gain from Rutgers University School of Social Work that would help you to address the problem you described in question 2?
4. After carefully reviewing the program requirements--including field education hours and course load expectations--please describe how you will manage to fulfill the program requirements, while balancing field education weekday hours and academic work with other life commitments.