proposal essay

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  1. make MY opinion on each of my points clearer throughout the essay, make it more like my opinion and not like a summary of information and points.
  2. take my points from the conclusion and relocated in the introduction because the introduction is weak and don’t make a lot of sense and the info in the conclusion must be more developed in the introduction.
  3. Make sure that each body paragraph thesis statement makes sense with MY point of view and also to say how we can address this problem and solve them 
  4. only use the two sources in the work cited to add more info
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