prop essay
dboy123- make MY opinion on each of my points clearer throughout the essay, make it more like my opinion and not like a summary of information and points.
- take my points from the conclusion and relocated in the introduction because the introduction is weak and don’t make a lot of sense and the info in the conclusion must be more developed in the introduction.
- Make sure that each body paragraph thesis statement makes sense with MY point of view and also to say how we can address this problem and solve them
- only use the two sources in the work cited to add more info
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