Peer Review of Documented Argument Draft 1

Carefully review the comments your professor made on your first draft of the Documented Argument. Write a well-constructed paragraph in which you identify two areas for development in your initial draft of the argument and describe what you will need to do to improve your argument.  Post the relevant sections for your peers to evaluate. Remember that you are focusing on the big picture issues for this paper; editing will come later.

• Make initial post
• 250-300 words