Paper Revision

Hi

Here are the guidelines for the revision and expansion:

B. Expand: the original paper connected your favored theory of mind with the question of personal identity.  TO expand your paper, add a paragraph that addresses ONE of the following:  

i.    Explain which theory of identity (body, psychological continuity, etc.)  fits your theory of mind best. Identify one challenge and one benefit of this theory of identity.  Do you think this theory captures what you believe is most important about identity?

ii.  For many, race and/or gender are important aspects of their identity.  Drawing from one of our readings (handout on gender and race, Tuvel's essay, or our readings on feminist philosophy), explain how there are different ways of thinking about race or gender (pick one), and how this fits, or doesn't fit into your chosen theory of mind.  Finally, say what you think is most important about race or gender as a feature of identity.  

After revising, the expanded portion shouldn't add more than 250 words to the paper.  Be sure to go back and revise the thesis to indicate what you are adding.  

I will attach the thesis. 

don't use a references and it is need to be done in 24 hours. 

thank you