Paper Revision

The paper to be revised is attached. The remarks that need to be addressed for the revision are attached as well.

The original directions are below:

 

Write a 3 page double spaced position paper (not including the cover page and references) about your beliefs about  effectively teaching math and science in today's K-12 classrooms. Explain your position on Common Core math standards, the Next Generation Science Standards, and STEM v STEAM.

Adhere to APA 6th edition style. 

Include at least 6-8 in-text citations and at least 5 references.

Use this as one of your references:

Sousa, D. A., & Pilecki, T. (2013). From STEM to STEAM: Using brain-compatible 

strategies to integrate the arts. Thousand Oaks, CA: Corwin

DO NOT RESUBMIT THE SAME PAPER> THIS IS A REVISION AND DOES NOT REQUIRE THE WRITER TO START FROM SCRATCH> JUST ADDRESS THE ISSUES IN THE REMARKS AND COMPLETE THIS