need more informastion on my paper

my papper is already wrietn i just need more information that my profosser worte a comment. 

This is my prof comment:

I think you've done some pretty good work on this, and your literature review provides an interesting and informative overview of the information in your research articles.   Some things to watch for are that you are citing in-text in APA Style instead of MLA (your works cited citations look good--they are MLA Style), and you could more clearly introduce sources in the body paragraphs. For example, when you introduce Ehun's article you do pretty well, like this:  Eshun (2009) has authored Business Incubation as a Strategy: A longitudinal study, which focuses on the redesign of business structures to adapt business incubation for growth.   You could, though, add more information: Joseph P. Eshun authored "Business Incubation as Strategy," which was published in Business Strategy Series. This longitudinal study focuses on the redesign of business structures to adapt business incubation for growth.