Need editing help for my thesis (professor comments included in document) and in according to the template attached

 Need to edit the thesis document according to professor comments and provide additional references and citations according to my topic and research. Attached is the sample dissertation template and my thesis document. My thesis document should be according to the thesis template and my thesis document has professor comments. I need each comment to be addressed and edited as per the professor's instructions. Also, try to gather and include additional references and citations for my research work and title. Formatting should be in APA 7th and according to the sample template. All the professor comments should be answered perfectly and reviewed carefully. !! KEEP EVERYTHING CONFIDENTIAL !!