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FEEDBACK AND GRADES

1.4 Introductory Essay

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10 / 10

1.8 Annotating "A Talk to Teachers"

Grade:12 / 15

1.12 Belonging, Cultural Responsive, and Trauma articles annotations

Grade:15 / 15

1.14 Annotation Assignment 5

Grade:15 / 15

2.2 Independent Topic Research and Annotations

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2.3 Synthesis paragraphs on initial topic research

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You've done an incredible job of analyzing the details around these articles and identifying a common theme. One thought that could make your composition even stronger is to add a sentence or two which identifies and names a specific pattern, trend, or commonality amongst multiple authors. Something along the lines of "These authors share a vision of a classroom where all students, regardless of where, when, or how they were born, feel a sense of inclusivity when entering their classrooms" or something like "Each other has a unique perspective, but the details in their arguments share the perspective of the teacher's responsibility to intentionally apply strategies which promote relationship building, inclusivity" or "While each author provides a different idea on how to drive inclusivity, a common belief amongst them is that there is a positive relationship between student inclusivity and student academic performance". Great work here.