Final Draft Essay

In my first draft I have made a lot of mistakes. and my peer wrote some comments on It. so, I need the final draft to be finished by applying the comments firstly. 

Secondl, There is an instruction file please write an essay depending on those instructions even if you had to change the whole essay. I just want it to be a good essay please.

aling with the files is King Luther’s speech (written). But in case you want to watch the video... this is the link:

https://youtu.be/vP4iY1TtS3s

please do your best.
- MLA form