ESSAY REVIEW- ANSWER QUESTIONS IN FULL SENTENCES.

You will need to respond to the following questions of your assigned essays. Number your responses and answer in complete sentences.

TWO ESSAYS

1. Hook –Which of our hook strategies (check outline) does the introduction use? If it doesn’t use any of the outlined strategies, which one would you recommend?
2. Thesis – What word is the author defining? What is their definition of the word? Does their definition appear at the end of the introduction – it should not appear at the start of the essay! If the definition is not clear, explain what they can do to make it clearer.
3. Body Paragraph 1
   • What’s the focus of the first body paragraph?
   • Is this main point mentioned in the thesis?
   • Does it incorporate a personal example?
4. Body Paragraph 2
   • What’s the focus of the second body paragraph?
   • Is this main point mentioned in the thesis?
   • Does it incorporate a personal example?
5. Body Paragraph 3 
   • What’s the focus of the third body paragraph?
   • Is this main point mentioned in the thesis?
   • Does it incorporate a personal example?
6. Conclusion –Does the conclusion restate the thesis statement?
7. Praise - What's one thing you liked about this essay?