Editing my essay

Editing my essay to become better. 

1- Does the paper target a narrow and specific topic? if not fix it. 

2- Is the thesis specific and arguable? Is there an active verb? if not fix it. 

3- Does the thesis evolve throughout the paper? Are there at least 2 evolved theses? if not fix it. 

4- Is evidence employed that BOTH substantiates and complicates the theses? Is there 1 example of visual analysis? if not fix it. 

5- Are 2 different sources productively and effectively quoted (directly) in the essay? if not fix it.