Chapter 2 (2)

We are almost there! There's still some cleaning up to do with a few areas to tighten. See comments within your work and below: The chapter has a stronger research gap than the earlier draft. The gap is generally correct, but it becomes too broad and somewhat contradictory. You state that many studies rely on perceptions and that more in-depth qualitative and quantitative studies are needed. Later, you say there is a need to focus on quantitative data, but then immediately argue for qualitative action research. Let's clear this up and clean this up. There are numerous APA citation errors: missing commas between author names and years, missing spaces before citations, incorrect ampersand usage in narrative citations, parenthetical punctuation problems, and sources that are not alphabetized when multiple are used in-text. Do some extensive cleaning throughout in this frame of reference. The action research section is useful, but it may be more detailed than Chapter 2 requires. It should stay as a literature-based rationale for why action research fits CRT implementation, reflective practice, and classroom-based improvement. However, procedural details and claims about how the study will be conducted should be saved for Chapter 3. See the notes throughout and be sure to comb through the entire chapter to make sure that the feedback left in one place is addressed in all instances. A thorough and attentive clean-up should be able to trigger approval on the next submission. Keep up the progress and momentum