Can some one help me Revise my paper 2 page

I need someone to revise it and add more details to this paper. (I did include the sources I want to use.

Here's the instruction for the paper  

Part 1

            Your paper should begin with a description of your inquiry; what is your issue? What do you hope to find? Next, assess arguments and other discourse that relates to your issue. Make sure you seek out sources that differ with your opinion as well as those that agree with your position. (This will be of special importance later for your final project). As you read through the sources you are analyzing don’t forget to consider the following:

• Consider the rhetorical context of the article—what part does that play in the author’s argument?
• Talk about what was and was not sound about the argument.
• How and why did that argument influence your initial opinion

APA style Please