A need corrections and A-little touch

                              THIS IS A SEPARATE ASSIGNMENT, MUST ALSO BE COMPLETED 

From your research paper rough draft, submit 1 fully developed and revised body paragraph for writing feedback; include your "working" thesis statement at the top of the page.

Submission Example, 

Working Thesis: ____________________________________

Body Paragraph 1: __________________________________

Assignment worth 25 points.

Grading Criteria:

Paragraph contains: topic sentence, supporting evidence and/or examples, explanation, closing sentence.

                                     THE ASSIGMENT BELOW HAS  IT OWN INSTRUCTION