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I have addressed some points below regarding your submitted research work.
Strengths
• The topic has been chosen very well and you discussed one of the most
important topics in the world, every year healthcare system has paid much
money in decreasing stressors in human life.
• The population of the study was chosen in an acceptable amount
• Table 1 described a demographic point very well and meet all APA criteria.
• The cited papers were matched to your title.
Weaknesses
• The ratio between male and female was not good enough, because male and
female has completely different physiological response to stressors.(Leistner
& Menke, 2020)
• You didn’t mention what type of spirituality has been studied.
• Great job with the survey discussion for this week’s assignment. The first strength
of your assignment was well written and had excellent information that
corresponded with the results that you included within the assignment. The
second strength was that you incorporated clearly the table and figure in your text.
I was able to read and understand the information clearly. I felt that the way you
discussed the table and the figure within your paper was easy to follow and was
never confusing. However, one error that I found was that I did not see what type
of spirituality you were specifically discussing. I would elaborate on the type of
spirituality that you are discussing in order to flow properly. The second error that I
found was that your reference page listed different fonts. I would double-check if
the font is the correct format (St. Peters, M., 2021). The third error was that the
ratio between both men and women was not a strong conclusion because men
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and women experience different levels of physiological responses regarding
stress. I would go a step further to discuss the difference to enhance and
strengthen this specific area.
• Reference
American Psychological Association. (2020). Publication manual of the American l l l l l l l l
l l l l Psychological l Association (7th ed.). https://doi.org/10.1037/0000165-000
Harris, D. (2022). Discussion thread: M6 research project review. Research Methods
l l l l and Statistics in Psychology II. Retrieved April 22, 2022, from
l l l l https://canvas.liberty.edu/courses/336469/discussion_topics/2028942?
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St. Peters, M. (2022). Correlation and Regression in SPSS. Research Methods and
l l l l Statistics in Psychology II. Retrieved April 22, 2022, from
l l l l https://canvas.liberty.edu/courses/336469/modules
Leistner, C., & Menke, A. (2020). Hypothalamic-pituitary-adrenal axis and stress. Handb
Clin Neurol, 175, 55-64. https://doi.org/10.1016/B978-0-444-64123-6.00004-7
