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I have addressed some points below regarding your submitted research work.
Strengths
• The topic has been chosen very well and you discussed one of the most
important topics in the world, every year healthcare system has paid much
money in decreasing stressors in human life.
• The population of the study was chosen in an acceptable amount
• Table 1 described a demographic point very well and meet all APA criteria.
• The cited papers were matched to your title.
Weaknesses
• The ratio between male and female was not good enough, because male
and female has completely different physiological response to
stressors.(Leistner & Menke, 2020)
• You didn’t mention what type of spirituality has been studied.
• Great job with the survey discussion for this week’s assignment. The first
strength of your assignment was well written and had excellent information
that corresponded with the results that you included within the assignment.
The second strength was that you incorporated clearly the table and figure in
your text. I was able to read and understand the information clearly. I felt that
the way you discussed the table and the figure within your paper was easy to
follow and was never confusing. However, one error that I found was that I did
not see what type of spirituality you were specifically discussing. I would
elaborate on the type of spirituality that you are discussing in order to flow
properly. The second error that I found was that your reference page listed
different fonts. I would double-check if the font is the correct format (St.
Peters, M., 2021). The third error was that the ratio between both men and
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women was not a strong conclusion because men and women experience
different levels of physiological responses regarding stress. I would go a step
further to discuss the difference to enhance and strengthen this specific area.
• Reference
American Psychological Association. (2020). Publication manual of the American k k k k k k k k
k k k k Psychological k Association (7th ed.). https://doi.org/10.1037/0000165-000
Harris, D. (2022). Discussion thread: M6 research project review. Research Methods
k k k k and Statistics in Psychology II. Retrieved April 22, 2022, from
k k k https://canvas.liberty.edu/courses/336469/discussion_topics/2028942?
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St. Peters, M. (2022). Correlation and Regression in SPSS. Research Methods and
k k k k Statistics in Psychology II. Retrieved April 22, 2022, from
k k k https://canvas.liberty.edu/courses/336469/modules
Leistner, C., & Menke, A. (2020). Hypothalamic-pituitary-adrenal axis and stress.
Handb Clin Neurol, 175, 55-64. https://doi.org/10.1016/B978-0-444-64123-6.00004-7
