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After reviewing your result and discussion sections, I found that there were a few
areas of improvement needed, but also a few areas that you did an excellent job with.
Unfortunately, there are many areas that are going to need to be looked back on and
be changed up slightly.Mainly making sure you are going back to reference the APA
Manual will be helpful for any questions.
STRENGTHS:
- You provided proper information about your sample size and the demographic
variable.
- You also has a nice header set up, along with proper heading for each section.
WEAKNESSES:
- Make sure you have Figure 1, Figure 2, Figure3, or Table 1, etc. labeled above each
one of your graphs or tables. There should also be a title about each table or graph,
along with a note at the bottom of each one to describe what you are looking at in
each table or graph (American Psychological Association, 2020, p. 199, 215-216, 225).
- The intext citations that you currently have unfortunately are slightly wrong, make
sure that the author(s) name and date are in parenthesis (American Psychological
Association, 2020, p.).
- Your graphs and tables seem to be copy and pasted directed from SPSS, however, it
is not in APA format. You can find this proper format presented by Dr. Megan St.
Peters (2022) in last week’s tutorial video (St. Peters, 2022).
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REFERENCES
American Psychological Association. (2020). Publication Manual of the American
Psychological Association (7th ed.). https://doi.org/10.1037/0000165-000 Links to
an external site.
St. Peters, M. (2022). Scientific Writing: Results and Discussion. Research Methods
and
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