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P – P TILLUSTRATION
ARAGRAPH REWRITING EMPLATE
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NOTICE:
There are 4 steps for this assignment: Planning (1), Rough Draft (2), Revised Draft (3),
and Edited Draft (4).
In order to complete the writing assignment correctly and to receive the maximum
amount of points for your work, you must complete all 4 steps.
Points will be deducted for any missing step.
Review the assignment instructions and the grading rubric carefully to ensure that you
have completed all of the required elements before submitting your prewriting
assignment.
Read and sign this honor statement prior to submitting your assignment:
By typing my name in the space provided, I certify that all words and ideas in my writing
assignment are mine alone, and, if I used another person’s words or ideas (by summarizing,
paraphrasing, or directly quoting), I gave credit to that author, and I also put quotation marks
around any direct quotations.
By signing my name, I also understand that, if I have copied someone else’s ideas or words, I
have plagiarized, and I understand that the penalty for plagiarism is course failure.
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Step 1: Illustration Paragraph Planning and Outline
Directions: Choose one of the writing prompts below. Then, complete all of the elements of the
planning; otherwise, the content of your piece will not be accurate.
Writing Prompts: Choose an abstract idea or concept, and write a paragraph that explains it
through examples. You may think of your own concept or use one of these: loyalty, creativity,
fun, happiness, loneliness, honesty, love, prejudice, jealousy, beauty, patience, friendship,
patriotism, teamwork.
OR
Write a paragraph describing a hero or villain as depicted in a film you have seen.
Topic: Teamwork makes the dream work, as the author John Maxwell would say.
Attitude/Point: Having teamwork can led to a very successful path in life.
Audience: My mother
Purpose: To inform and pursued
Topic Sentence: Teamwork makes the dream work and can led to a very successful path in
life.
Brainstorm List of Possible Examples: Being apart of a team, Producing music with a
partner, How to work well with a team
Sentence Outline:
1.Having Teamwork
Listening to different ideas
Giving advice
Taking advice
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Step 2: Illustration Paragraph Rough Draft
Directions: Write a rough draft that follows your paragraph plan in the space provided below,
beginning with your topic sentence. Do not worry about spelling or grammar; just let your
thoughts flow. End with a good concluding sentence that restates your general observation or
expresses your initial opinion about your subject in different words. It must be at least 200
words, no less and not too much more.
Teamwork makes the dream work and can led to a very successful path in life. John Maxwell
once wrote a book entitled "Teamwork Makes The Dreamwork" the is one of the most powerful
statements I have ever heard. I say this is a powerful statement because as being part of a team i
can attest to that statement. I have a music production company with my best friend/partner
Forrest, not only is he my partner in music he is also my partner in life.. Being apart of a duo
has taught me how to be a team player in every aspect in life. It allows me to be able to take
listen to other people's opinion anything. I'm not just getting it from my perspective I am also
getting it from someone else's perspective, which can always help. The thing about being a team
you have to learn how to come to a compromise because you are dealing with more than one
personalities. Having teamwork is all about listening, giving, and being able to take other's
advice sometimes. Knowing that your team or your partner has your back at any given moment.
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Step 3: Illustration Paragraph Revised Draft
Directions: Copy your Illustration Paragraph Rough Draft (from above) and paste it below, click
on “Tools” or “Review” if you are using Microsoft Word, and hit “Track Changes.” This is so
your instructor can see all the changes you make. Begin reading through your rough draft and
make changes to the content as you see fit. Add more supporting details if needed or delete
irrelevant ones that do not relate to your dominant impression. Add transitional words or
phrases to help the paragraph flow in a logical order. Then, save the draft with the changes.
Teamwork makes the dream work and can led to a very successful path in life. John Maxwell
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attest to that statement. I have a music production company with my best friend/partner Forrest,
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team the dream won't work. You have kKnowing that your team or your partner has your back at
any given moment in time. In the words of John Maxwell and my opinon I agree that "Teamwork
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Step 4: Illustration Paragraph Edited Draft
Directions: Turn off the “Track Changes” feature. Copy your Illustration Paragraph Revised Draft,
paste it below, click on “Tools” or “Review” if you are using Microsoft Word, and make sure you
turn on the “Track Changes” feature. Edit for any spelling, punctuation, or
grammatical errors. Focus especially on the concepts you have recently studied. Save these
changes.
NOTE: Use of contractions (can’t, won’t, doesn’t, etc.) and second person (any form of the
pronoun “you”) is strictly prohibited and will result in loss of points on writing
assignments.
Teamwork makes the dream work and can led to a very successful path in life. John Maxwell
once wrote a book entitled "Teamwork Makes The Dreamwork" in my opinion this is one of the
most powerful statements. I say this is a powerful statement because as being apart of a team it
allows me to see how someone else thinks. For example;. I have a music production company
with my best friend/partner Forrest, not only is he my partner in music he is also my partner in
life. Being apart of a duo has taught me how to be a team player in every aspect in life. It allows
me to be able to take and listen to advice my partner gives me. The thing about being apart of a
team I had to learn how to come to a compromise because I am dealing with anotherone other
personality. Having teamwork is all about listening, giving, and showing other people you are a
team player. It is also about trusting your team because if you cannot trust your team the dream
won't work. My partner and I have had a very successful career because we have figured out the
formula of a good solid team. You have knowing that your team or your partner has your back at
any given moment in time. In the words of John Maxwell and in my my opinonopinion I agree that
"Teamwork makes the Dream work.
