Word choise and tone in the novel "the long walk''

Most follow instructions!!!! again must fallow instructions!!! i have very strict professor so before you send me a hand shake, assignment comes with a 7 pg instructions, you must fallow.

I got rid of my old client because dosent fallow instructions and rush everything.

So if you can be honest with, i'll give you more work. I have reader responsis every week for the rest of the semester. And 2 5 paragraph essays so if you do good work i'll give you more work!