revising Essay for East Asia History course

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I posted my completed essay which need to be revised according to my professor's FEEDBACK(all in attachment), everything should be following to his feedback. The instruction for essay is with it in attachment. There are a lot of unclear statement and wrong concentration in my essay which need to be revised. Also, i posted BOOK SOURCE that need to be added in the essay. And there are 3 outside sources in my essay which are not matching with my statement so that you need to find three new sourcesn online!

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