Revise Senate Report paper!
I need someone to help me revise this paper based on the following instructions and peer review feedback:
Outline:
- Heading as structured on handout (1.5 inch margins around text on all pages except reference page)
- Introduction to the Report that includes information about what this report is about
- Purpose of legislation
- Establishing the debate section (brief paragraph on the different perspectives that will be addressed in the report—Broad/basic overview of the debate in one paragraph)
- Perspectives for the Bill (3 different viewpoints—3 different paragraphs)
- Perspectives against the Bill (3 different viewpoints-- 3 different paragraphs)
- Recommendation for the Senator
- APA Reference Page
Peer Review Feedback:
- The "PROPONENTS OF THE BROKAW LAW" section only has 2 viewpoints, needs one more
- The second viewpoint from Sarah Krouse and Tom McGinty in "PROPONENTS OF THE BROKAW LAW" is not clear why this should lead to intervention
- The "OPPONENTS OF THE BROKAW LAW" section only has 1 viewpoint, needs 2 more
- Unclear why Benoit thought these regulations lead to investor rights changes
- Each section is too long. While each section needs to add more viewpoints, the original paper needs to be shortened. The max length of this paper is 5 pages.
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