prof. Nicholas

  A. I will ttached my first draft essay because there is the third citation with my friend who is student at UAMS. Plus,

there are two ciations Gee's and Sawels. ( please do not use another of them )

it would be 3 ciatation 

1. James Paul Gee

2. Ghon Swales.

3. Interview Katie Daitch.

B. i attached the perfect essay about the same discourse community ( Example) pretty close like waht I want

C. My prof needs from us write in first each prograph the theory and explain it and that my reflaction.

D. I am gonna give you green light to change any thing that you see in my essay is wrong.

F. It will be MLA style

Note ( i attached the first draft with my prof critsis) 

I appreciate if you make it very fancy