Persuasive Essay - Revision of First Draft

I need the following done to the attached Persuasive Essay:

Feedback: 1. You did not challenge the claim that free speech should be limited; you supported the claim. You need to challenge the claim.  2. Needed more structure: The first paragraph should briefly introduce topic, give thesis and list 3 main points. Next three paragraphs should each cover a main point. Then provide a concluding paragraph that summarizes the thesis and main points.  Also, be sure you write at least one solid page of text, preferably more...