Paper revision

I want someone to fix my paper's sturcture and ideas , and revise it. My draft paper is attached below, and it is the topic :

1. Cultural Capital

Go to any public establishment of your choice (café, restaurant, library, dorm, art museum, airport, etc.).  Be as observant as possible. You are going to explore how cultural capital is symbolically evident in a variety of ways here.

Should use half of the content to depict people in the venue you choose, connect them to the cultural capital you fimiliarise. 

Things to look at include but are not limited to:

1. Arrangement of space (signs of hierarchy, comfort, symbolism)
2. Details of décor
3. Food
4. Fonts
5. Flooring, ceilings, etc
6. Sounds
7. Behavior of clients/participants/workers

Describe and analyze the ways in which the establishment performs verbal and nonverbal signs of cultural capital and status in relation to gender. You must explicitly use the idea of “cultural capital” in your analysis.