((For kim woods and phyllis young)) ONLY

i wrote an essay and i want you to paraphrase it without changing the meaning. and add more depth to it, change the order of the sentences a little bit.
i need it in like 13 hours from now. need it to be 3.5-4 pages. and in this format.  intro -> Before -> event -> After/change -> anything else. 

Add this in the essay, that i had a cousin who drank alcohol and partied and used some drugs when i was young and i've always thought that he was a bad person.. and when i came to the us i was becoming like him slowly... improvise. 

Due 22nd of September, 1pm San francisco time