i need help to fix my Rhetorical Analysis Essay

Hello i have an Rhetorical Analysis Essay i already wrote it. i just need help to fix it. i don't mind if you take off a paragraph or a sentence also i don't mind if you add a paragraph or a sentence the Essay most be at least 3 pages. it is all about Rhetorical Analysis an advertisement. my professor read my Essay and told me that my Essay that i wrote is Critical Analysis Essay more than Rhetorical Analysis Essay. also told me that i have to focus on 1-Logos-logic-language-works 2-Ethos-character 3-Pathos-emotions-emotional response I AM NOT A PICKY PERSON but put in your mind that i'm not a native speaker so keep the essay simple. my essay on the attachment and this is the link for the ad that i wrote about http://youtu.be/oxhSnNZH3Rk thank you.