essay

hi 

read the propmt that you have to follow it to write the essay

 some point he mention in class he need to be in the essay:

1)one intdoductio body paragraph 

2) 3 bodies pragraph talk about how public surveillance enhance our society or undermine it in some way

3)one body paragraph counter argument about how public surveillance enhance our society

4)one body paragraph conclosion 

5) 4 full pages 

when you read the propmpt you are going to understand more 

this is the way you have to follow in the essay 

good title 

the introduction paragraph must have:

1. background on the topic

2. thesis 

3. essay map of suuport 

the bodys paragaph must have:

1. topic sentense 

2. detalis 

3. transtion or conculding sentence. 

conclusion paragraph must have: 

1. re-state point 

2 remind of suuport 

3. offer conculding remark as preduction, soution, suggestio, or recomendation. 

keys for citation:

1. introduce it -single phrase + comma -single phrase + "that"  -complete sentece + colon

2. cited it correctly ( last name page# or argraph #)

work cited. 

3. comment on it (relate to your thesis 

thesd are the basic thing the teacherr said it must inculde in the essay to get an A 

as i told you someone start for me but he didn't finish, so I attach to you the introduction he did and and the 3 resourses he choose it becuse I have to use 3 resourses for this essay 

you have chance to start over, change the resourse, or any thing just give a good essay