ENGLISH ESSAY
I have an essay along with feedback. All I want you to do is make a stronger anecdotes and stonger observation. Keep the format as it is. The paragraphs on page 3 need the most work. You can see the feedback in the last pages.
The zine.pdf file is the feedback
The essay_2_english_101.docx is the essay
Note that I corrected the grammar.
Keep the format as it is just make a stronger anecdotes and stonger observation. The most work will be in paragraphs in page 3
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