editing essay

I want you to edit my 4  pages essay by adding quotes from the attachments and analyze it , check my grammar mistake, expand the counter argument. 

http://www.wsj.com/articles/SB10001424052748704538404574539910412824756

for the article Chicago's Camera Network Is Everywhere

http://www.cfr.org/terrorism-and-technology/terrorists-internet/p10005

for the article Terrorists and the Internet